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Hmm, the song link is broken, all I could find was a song called "I Had Me a Girl" by a group called "The Civil Wars".
Other than that the story is up and running. I see there aren't many comments on the first several chapters, perhaps that's to be expected? I appreciate how you are running several stories at once in each chapter it gives a broader overview of what's going on. It might be interesting if you had a character in there who remains loyal to the Enclave no matter what, even though he, or she, has to question a lot of what's going on, but that is just a thought...
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Thanks for the heads-up on the broken link. That actually is the version of the song I had intended, so I am glad you could find it. As for your suggestion, well we will just have to see where the loyalties end up going. But I do understand where you are coming from on that suggestion.