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I am really glad you liked this song. I have to admit I do not know if it was part of the game as I have not played it yet. I must admit I have a more than passing interest in WW1 and how it has affected the world since. If I find out I will let you know.
Well, this chapter was more intense than some of the others. From a reader's pov it is rather hard to see the team caught up in a major loss although it is good from he pov of the story that they don't just win continually but have to deal with losses and setbacks, just like in real life. Good story so far, looking forward to the next chapters.
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I am glad you enjoyed the chapter, as well as understand the necessity to show that not everything can go the way the heroes would desire.
I hope you enjoy the up coming chapters as well.