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Jayelms43


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If you guys are wondering yes he looks just like the one off of Young Justice League but he has all the powers of Superman

Are you also gonna include the Gen 5 ponies?

You won’t give up on the story will you

Also because this is the fall of equestria universe will your story Eventually be updated to mature

You need to edit this chapter a lot of the words are wrong

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Also I fix some of them are you happy now?

Yes sorry for nitpicking But people need to know what type of story you have released

Kill kill kill kill the caribou make them PAY WITH THERE LIFES

YES. I love this story keep up the great work 👍🏻🙂

Things are happening a bit too fast. Also these chapters seem too short

There are multiple problems I’m seeing in this story, First, there are so many mistakes, second every time he meets somepony, and he says their name, they don’t ask who he is and why they know their name.

"You could say," Big Mac said before taking off the hood to show his face that was only half metal. "I gotta update," he finished while taking off the cloak and showing his entire body was full on metal. Only a few parts still have his regular skin but what was more surprising was a huge glow green rock in his chest.

Oh joy! You brought in Metallo!

I’m close to finishing the chapter, just give me a couple weeks.

Sorry I just don't like Grey Jedi. It is like a vegetarian eating meat.

Just finished and posted the crossover! You should post your version too!

question? Why didn't Superboy try to use Force healing on Shining armor as long as he's charged by the sun he should be immortal meaning that transferring life force is it a problem for him

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You know the Jed-Di are the original Force users and we're all in terms of their Outlook Gray so instead of calling them a gray Jedi call them the Jed-Di or the true order of the force

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