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I will keep an eye on this
i like this start lets see how this Story Progresses and hopefully this story will not be put on hiatus
An interesting story, the beginning promises to be interesting, but there is no expansion of the characters as they look a little longer than blue, and a bit of a side story or flashbacks for some important events, and the history of their transformation was too shallow, according to me, they should at least be more extensive and not only suddenly "bright white light enveloped them and they got new limbs" it should be expanded, but even at the beginning, this story can be the basis for a very good one. I used Google Translator to help me do sorry for enny gramar issus
Wait didn t you say that on of them had a horn and the other had a pair of wings at there birth and when there awakend you said they got new appendages. spike had a new pair of wings and Michael had a new horn so aren t they Alicorns? So why isn t Twilight wondering about that?
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I forgot to mention they're wearing Enchanted necklaces going to hide extra appendages, like Michael's horn and spike wings
please tell me this story is getting more because this $#@& is GOOD
How are Micheal and Spike sailors?
This chapter is all over the place and I really hate a whole lot of stuff happening in it.
And there's too many stuff to list in here why I hated it, unless you ask of me.
It's been a long time since you wrote in your stories.