The Early Bird

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KingSombraTheTyrantRuler

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler #1 · Feb 8th, 2022 · 2 · ·

This was great! I loved every second of it!

fanreader999999

fanreader999999 #2 · Feb 9th, 2022 · 1 · ·

Hm.

Alcatraz

Alcatraz #3 · Feb 9th, 2022 · · ·

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Glad you enjoyed it!

I live to please~

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler #4 · Feb 9th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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You're welcome. :D

Fujimi200SX

Fujimi200SX #5 · Feb 9th, 2022 · · ·

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My thoughts exactly.

AbruptUrethra

AbruptUrethra #6 · Feb 10th, 2022 · 5 · ·

What a fascinating portrayal of a relationship. The balance between full-time dedication and keeping up a family-friendly life is very nicely done.

I really liked the details of just how dedicated she was to the role. There's a difference between roleplaying in bed, and dedicating your life to be wholly owned by someone; too many stories just cop-out by going "and then the roleplay ended or the safeword was said, and the entire dynamic stopped and everything went back to normal once again". Here, though, it's quite clear just how dedicated she is at making this her role in life, full-time, forever. Even as the Master maintains an air of "almost equality" (to quote the story) during off-time, her own internal monologue is unwavering in thinking of herself as his property.
At the same time, unless one swears off having a family at all, any sort of arrangement like that would need to somehow account for raising kids "normally" while all this is going on in the background. The actual logistics of that would not be trivial, and I think this was handled pretty well here without resorting to too much cop-outs or handwaving. We get to actually see how the family life runs.

Quite great!

Alcatraz