Minor note: This is a first time attempt at writing a story out side of education. I'm planning it to be a small thing with about 4-6 chapters. Any critique is welcome as long as its helpful

i have always wanted this kind of story where twilight loses control of her temper and nearly all of her rational thinking this will be interesting

Second chapter out. I hear by declare that Magical Pony Flak Cannons should be made canon.

Chapter 3 is now out. A talking chapter! Only one more to go.

Whelp here is the end of the story. I think that I will use this as a prequel to another story. I dunno there are a lot of storys like that...we'll see.

Anyway I hope you enjoyed this, I am now going to try my hand at writing a comedy.

I wouldn't mind if you continued this story...especially with that last line.

>>12705201270520 I think I will but I need to come up with something a bit more substitutional. This was originally a one-shot of a fight scene I envisioned that has sorta bordered out a bit more than I expected.

The night terrors is why my best friend is afraid to wake me at times...

What makes it scarier is that I cannot fall asleep without something next to me, well within reach.

The scene when Twilight is woken by AJ... I can fully relate.

PTSD is a bitch to live with.

All in all, an excellent story

>>12722561272256 Well while I can't really relate I am glad that it was portrayed realistically.

I don't really know anyone who has night terrors or PTSD so I thought that I was making myself look a bit stupid or making it a bit to dramatic.

Still I'm glad you enjoyed the read.

(Shameless self promotion: Check out my other story if you like my writing style. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/51135/Weekend-At-Pinkies)

That last part of this chapter, whoa!

Your welcome, and I shall check it out and add it to my list of reads