When Sunset Shimmer first came to the human world, she met a very special girl. This girl would go on to become her guide to the world, as well as her girlfriend. This pairing didn't last, however, as Sunset's selfish and destructive nature drove a wedge between them.
Now, years after their breakup, Sunset gets an invite from her former lover to meet up again. No longer the manipulative bully she once was, Sunset takes the opportunity to make amends with the one girl she never got a chance to, and repair their broken relationship.
An entry for the Sunset x Sunset contest. Also my first story published to FimFiction!
Edit 30/10/21: What the crap, I won?
I must say, for a first story, very well done!
My heart is melting that was such a cute fluffy story. 👍
So that's why the flashbacks were in that order!
The dynamic between your pair is refreshingly alchemical, flowing smoothly from who they are as indiiduals. Many of the "present day" scenes leave a first impression as almost filler... possibly related to the hi! we're an item again, kthx? that just kind of happens by proximity. The ensemble at the beginning was fun and impeccably voiced. Th3Displaced - now there's a fraught handle!
This one's a more subtle story than most, but, while it does some things well, other areas may want some polishing. Thanks for writing!
Thanks for writing. :)
Well, that's certainly a take on the Sunset Question I doubt many had considered... a pretty sweet one, too.
Yeah, sometimes when I need to keep myself awake I'll open to a random year in my encyclopedia and read about the atrocities of the time.
This story is so cute, and beautiful!^_^
hehe, it definitely would be Rainbow Dash to say this
always fun to see inexplicably ponified versions of things in the Equestria Girls universe
very interesting username there! displaced from what?
idk if this was intentional but that is an ominous choice of number
both Sunsets are living in apartments on their own in the city so young!
well, how’s she going to explain when there are two of her walking around? makes sense that she is not thinking things through after being caught off-guard (heh) though!
love that she says this despite how bizarre it would be to the other Sunset
yes this is pre-redemption Sunset Shimmer so true
and oof
and oof! and this does fill in a bit of how pony Sunset was able to land in the human world on her feet, despite having to learn how it works for the very first time as a child, if she simply took over the life of a too-trusting human Sunset!
fandom reference!
i mean given what we just saw of their last interaction, yeah, i am with Shimmy here!
same brain moment
honestly that really does sound like the whole package
what is neat about this ship is that it is SciSet if the two characters were alternate reality versions of each other that take turns living the same life
oh boy, that joke could get awkward later
oh, so that’s where all those characters are in EqG!
always love to see Sunset’s canonical painting hobby
perfectly terrible
oof, yeah! i can definitely see young Sunset having buyer’s remorse after that
aww! i really like the structure here, with the flashback scenes being told backwards until their very first meeting, and oof, this line hits harder knowing what is in store for their futures. works on two levels, too, with the apartment being a home for the two of them and then just pony Sunset, giving a great layer of dramatic irony. always love stuff like that
and a very sweet way to end it! i don’t usually go for happy endings, but interesting shipping situations like characters dating alternate universe versions of themselves are the exception. i just want to see those work unironically. very glad that the contest resulted in an entry such as this!
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Thanks so much for the thoughts, I appreciate it! I had a lot of fun writing this and I'm glad so many people enjoyed.
Interesting fact: The original concept for this story was very different, and a LOT darker, but I retooled it for the sake of the contest and time restraints. And I can definitely say that I like this way better than what I initially thought of.
This is so beautiful! I will admit I'm not the biggest Sunset x Sunset shipper but I did love this fic so much <3