Just an introvert who likes My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. I also like to write MLP fanfiction. Twilight Sparkle is my favorite pony.
Mistakes.
Everybody makes them.
Not all mistakes are equal.
Some are far less costly than others, and some can spell disaster.
When mistakes have such disastrous effects that you know it was not meant to be this way, you try to fix them.
When alicorns make mistakes, the fate of the entire world can change on a whim.
I am Princess Twilight Sparkle. I know where it went wrong.
I may not be able to undo my mistakes, but I can prevent them from happening to myself again.
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Very nice story, and I am very excited for more!
Interesting, It'll be fun to see what Future Twilight will have to say. I imagine the big mistake has to do with Celestia dying, going crazy, or something else really bad happening to her. I'm sure this whole adventure will mess with the timeline quite a lot though, hopefully the end result is better than the original.
So this was a very nice chapter which was worth the wait.
Not really sure what to think of the fanfic so far, it's been seven chapters and Eclipse still hasn't revealed anything about what she wanted to accomplish by coming back in time but I'll continue to keep an eye on it since I have enjoyed a good bit of it though.
I love this story but what is this treat and what is the point. I mean why is she in this persific time period. I just interested because not all been explained however I love this story with different events happening at once. Love this
Sorry bad speller
Love these chapters keep it up
Love this chapter can't wait to see what happens next. I am so excited to see what havens next
Wait I read through it again and again and came to a conclusion that makes no sense is she as they call her is Eclipse (Twilight from future) but past Twilight for Eclipse that came back with her. Sorry I just putting my theory sorry again.
Do I see foreshadowing? Sounds like she plans to randomly turn Rainbow Dash into an alicorn. Maybe the others too. But Rainbow is the safe bet for a pony who would not mind living forever with Twilight.
Love this and I knew it was Eclipse love the chapter.
You killed Dinky!
Can't wait to read it yay
Oh LOVE THE CHAPTER love love love it and I am guessing some conflict between Twilight. I gathered a hypothesis on if the older versions of princess Twilight die they will have no effect because they live in different relity now. If the young version of Twilight dies relities would never exist in the relity making them not real and never happening but still exist by there different outcomes.
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I hope you're looking forwards to a happy ending. There should be a somewhat surprising plot twist soon...
Well, unless you saw it coming.
Love the fighting but how is present Twilight doing because it is technically her fault. Oh the conflict the the fight and anger. Can't wait for the next chapter
Twilight will be badass in this story, right?
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You will just have to wait to see...
Will Starlight Glimmer appear or at least be mentioned in this story?
You'd THINK that somepony would have called out an APB on Starlight...
7108571 What does APB stand for?
Interesting story. I'm curious how things will go. I can't wait to see how you continue and what you have planned. You're an excellent storyteller and I give you your due.
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I am glad you enjoy it, and thank you, that means a lot to me.
Love the chapter again a great success. It really pulls on your heartstrings. Hope to see more.
7257688 going to give your story a chance if this sends me into depression I shan't be happy
Finally this story brings Twilight real feelings. Now this is a emotional story. A wonder what Twilight would do after hearing this. Love the tension. Great chapter. So depressing I love it. Just want to point out that Eclipse is a bit suicidal when I re-read it again. Love the story. .
Verry heart felt
love the chapter 
Fuuuuuuiuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu I really wanna know how it ends.
ICR where, but IIRC you said "Between Cadance & Luna"
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From watching Cop Shows, it stands for All Points Bulletin. It means the police are looking for you.
I don't get it
What happend in the first part i just don't get it
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Wait, they completed a game of mareopoly in an hour... I mean I know this is a fantasy world but that's just ridiculous
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Yep, Princess Celestia's just that good- she's been around for thousands of years by now, I think she'd know a thing or two...
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Probably
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IMO Nightmare Twilight showed up
No! It's a picnic basket!
you probably mean "sing"
Treehugger (Spell checker says Tree Hugger)
You don't mean "complicated" Integral Calculus is complicated. You mean "embarrassing"
It has been a blast reading this, probably the best ending in my opinion, none of the Twilights have to sacrifice their lives and all of them are happy(well, at least as happy as Nightfall can get). To my favourites file then.