During Twilight's reign, all three tribes mixed. Cakes taught us that genes from ancestors of different tribes pop up randomly. What if a non-pegasus gene appears in Zepher Heights royalty? What if Zipp isn't the oldest? Then who is and what happened to her? How will she take the news?
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Not bad but you could’ve done more with this.
Promising premise of a pony type born outside their tribe, but could use more fleshing out.
It’s okay but... here’s my honest opinion:
Felt kinda rushed and... well... incomplete
interesting concept, but I think there could have been a little more to it
Interesting story, but it feels more like a prologue for a longer story where they go from friends to family. Is there going to be a sequel like that?