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The_Dash


Guess who's back? It's me, the answer is me . . . hi.

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James Ivanez has finally reached his limit. After living a life that has worn him down, mentally, physically and emotionally. He is pained by the knowledge that at twenty five years of age, he is more than willing to let it all go. So how does James handle his last few moments of life, before he is finally free to dream forever? Like any other sane suicidal young man would, a bottle of whiskey and a memory of someone special. Just as James is about to fade away, lying in a pool of his own blood. The one pony that can save him appears.

...Princess Luna.

After Luna convinces James into allowing her to save him, he is told that he will be given a new life, far from the one he has ever known...but at what price? James must now start a new life as a pegasus in Equestria, but without any memory what so ever of his life before as a human. How will James transition into his new life? Will he finally find the happiness he always searched for, or will his life in Equestria end just as tragically as it did on Earth?

Where does one begin, when one does not have a beginning..?

Will James ever remember his previous life, and will he ever be able to see the one who saved him again...his friend...his Silhouette In The Sky..?

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 30 )

Sorry I stole first :trollestia:
Anyways this is a re-edited/re-vamped version of the original.
The changes may be subtle, but I assure you they're there...
Also my grammar & punctuation are like OVER 9000!!! times better...

Dash did you really just make that joke? :facehoof:

What I thought it was good...right Aj?

Well sugarcube...no...it was awful. :ajbemused:

Oh...well I mean...

Dude...just stop before I make you change your username. :rainbowhuh:

Okay...well enjoy the rewrite guys...

Oh uh Dash...uhm don't forget your catchphrase, oh uhm well I mean unless you want to of course? :fluttershysad:

No I don't want to forget, thank for reminding me Flutters.
~Time to dash, Dash out~

I'm taking first, since a "certain author" decided to have that pony smash into my barn. :ajbemused:

Yeah sorry about that Aj...:scootangel:

Aw its alright sugarcube. :ajsleepy:

Hey Aj...whats these tools for? :rainbowhuh:

how else you supposed to fix my barn? :ajsmug:

oh :rainbowderp: ...well mares & gentlecolts...looks like I got some repair work to do...
~Time to dash, Dash out~

NIce story, also well written 4/5

Again nice story, but MAKE THEM LONGER:raritydespair:

1255248 Well I should have chapter 2 up by Friday.
I would post sooner but I've got work.

1254819 appreciate the good review amigo. :pinkiehappy:
I'm currently working on chapter 2. I'm shooting for around 3,000 - 3,500 words.

SOrry about the double post there, I have no clue what I did:facehoof:

1257158 I believe you commented on chapter 1, and also chapter 2.
So technically you didn't double post.:twilightsmile:

A few questions:

How did he know Luna in the prologue, was there a prequel to this or something?

When Luna started his life anew, did he start out fresh as a colt or is he still 25?

1262104 Ah all very good questions.
1: No there is no prequel.
2: Yes he is still 25.
3: I promise everything you'd want to know about Luna & James' relationship will be revealed...in time. :pinkiehappy:

Okay so first off...
For those of you who red my "All Apologies" blog, you'd know my family is going through some
rather difficult stuff right now...that being said I can't sleep cause I'm stressing. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl2.png
I already had the intro written for this chapter, and since I'm not sleeping I thought I'd write.
So here is chapter 5 everypony, I'm not promising it will be great, but it is here now.
As always I appreciate criticism, and comments will be replied to.
If you read the story and enjoy it, please feel free to share...just a thought. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire.png

~Time to dash, Dash out~ dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png

good work man also I hope everything turns out right if you need someone to chat to I'm here to help if you want it

1374476 appreciate it Brony, as usual if you have any opinions or ideas, hit me up with A pm.

The story gets better and better. One thing though. Why is it all in italics?

1375041 To answer your question...I don't know. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_sad.png
I've went through and checked the story, made sure all the coding was right, and still I can't figure out why.
I think it might have something to do with google docs not wanting to import properly. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png

Hey Dash if you PM me with your ideas for the next few chapters I'll help expand on them, but, for now I like where its going so I don't particularly want to give ideas on what you have for this set unless you want me to, also your writing quality is really good as always so you don't have to worry about that much. I'll be here all day today if you need me buddy.

I laughed so fucking hard when I found out who the agent was, good job man.

With all due respect you have the spelling and grammar skills of a chimpanzee, I've read the story, beginning to this chapter, and honestly the mechanical errors are a serious eyesore. I'd recommend getting a proofreader/editor. If you need one, I'm available, sorry if I came on too harsh. Send me a PM or reply to this comment if you're interested.

Overall this is a really nice story. I hope to see you write some more!!

WHY AREN'T YOU WORKING ON YOUR STORIES?!:flutterrage::flutterrage:

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