Pegasi Pillow Talks

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Three pairs of lovers talk after magic is restored to the world.

An entry into the Imposing Sovereigns III contest, using the prompts (Zipp, Integrity; Pipp, Kindness).

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Brave and Strong and Weird and Clever · 13th Oct 2021 · 994 words
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We Don't Fly Like We Used To · 13th Oct 2021 · 944 words
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You Blaze The Trail, I'll Watch Your Tail · 13th Oct 2021 · 541 words
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Comment posted by MistyShadowz deleted Oct 29th, 2021

Dragon Turtle

Dragon Turtle #2 · Oct 26th, 2021 · 1 · · We Don't Fly Like We Used To ·

I feel sunny would be acting a lot more reserved about the idea of pip taking pictures lemon bed. At least, it is if it's in a way where people know they're an item. I don't think a lot of people would want that revelation to made over the internet to thousands of strangers, without even much input.

Unless the implication is supposed to be that their relationship is already public?

Ri2

Ri2 #3 · Oct 26th, 2021 · 2 · · Brave and Strong and Weird and Clever ·

Awww. So precious!

Ri2

Ri2 #4 · Oct 26th, 2021 · 1 · · We Don't Fly Like We Used To ·

Such a voyeur.

Ri2

Ri2 #5 · Oct 26th, 2021 · 8 · · You Blaze The Trail, I'll Watch Your Tail ·

And poor Hitch is left out in the cold.

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #6 · Oct 26th, 2021 · 6 · · You Blaze The Trail, I'll Watch Your Tail ·

Nice character exploration. G5 is still largely unknown territory, so the time is right for this sort of thing. The pairings feel a bit pulled out of a hat, but we have so little to go on that it's hard for them not to if they've been established offscreen. Some quite nice vignettes, though they feel a little shallow at the end of the day. Still, thank you for this and best of luck in the judging.

TheLegendaryBillCipher