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ScisetShimmerEvan


Retired Fanfict writer, brony, creator of the SciSet Chronicles, loves Owl House, likes EQG & G5, a steam train lover, loathes Forgotten Friendship and a huge Sunset Shimmer fan!!!!!!!

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This story is a sequel to Love of Magic & Empathy


It’s Halloween and the Main 7 have decided to do a video game theme for their costumes this year. But they aren’t allowed to share what their costumes are until the night of the party at CHS, kinda like a secret Santa, but with costumes instead. But little did they know, they made a huge mix-up. 

Based on comic: https://www.deviantart.com/phucknuckl/art/Fashion-Faux-Pas-770132319

Set in the SciSet Chronicles timeline

Cover art by Emeraldblast63

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Comments ( 20 )

Twilight had a recommendation as well,l but they ended up not doing it after having a repeat of what happened last Halloween.

This bit is unnecessary unless you are going to expand on it, show what happened, etc.

While Sunset was disappointed with her idea ending up going down the drain her friends didn’t blame her for it since it was just an accident and they honestly thought it would make their senior year Halloween a year to remember as they were not gonna let their last Halloween at CHS be bad.

Reading this conversation, instead of a basic recap of it, could have given this story a extra layer of dimension it didn't have.

We could have also used a examination of Rarity's thoughts, coming to her conclusion about the importance of friendship.

It's a cute story, but it could stand to be fleshed out more, especially the ending.

11016615
I did it at the last minute but thx for at least giving the story a try, it's the thought that counts.

11016634
Did feel kind of rushed. And I liked the story, but figured I should make clear the issues I had with it. Thanks for responding!

11016648
its the least I can do for anyone who reads this story of mine.

How in the hell can someone WRITE down the same word seven times and not notice it? That's impossible.

And since Bowsette is technically a princess. Its funny how the girls shot down Rarity's idea about dressing up as Princesses only to come to the party dress as a princess, dress and all. Makes you wonder why Sunset even chose a princess in the first place after everyone disagreed with Raity's idea.

I feel like she planned for this to happen just to help Rarity out while also throwing in her own idea in the mix.

11016779
Still doesn't change the fact that even if they each believe they were the only one dressing up like a princess. The ones who made such a huge fuss about it still came dressed like a princess.

Rarity sure had every right to be mad. Mistake or not.

11016785
Well, sometimes its best to be happy with what we have. We can't allow get what we want.

11016789
Except Rairty did get what she wanted. All of them dressing up as a princess.

11016796
And that's what counts in the end, and besides I was trying to base this story off of the comic I mentioned.

11016799
And you succeeded!

Because like Rarity said they are a bunch of dumb skanks.

I'll be honest a little rushed but hey I get it with college and all. I enjoyed it now that I finally got to read it.

Right in front of her were all her friends in the exact same costume that she was wearing. Aside from Spike who was dressed up as Mario.
Rarity was just lost for words for what she saw before her. She was so angry she felt like screaming until Sunset decided to explain to Rarity how this happened in the first place.
“So uh, sorry I forgot to mention this but I kinda wrote down the same names on all the tabs of paper for your costume by accident. I guess when I wrote them, I wasn’t fully paying attention, so it seems like we all ended up dressing up as Boswette. Sorry girls.”

After reading the comic I saw that one coming a a mile away. As always you have done well. Have a stache :moustache:

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Thx my friend, it means a lot. :twilightsmile:

“So uh, sorry I forgot to mention this but I kinda wrote down the same names on all the tabs of paper for your costume by accident.

Here's a question Sunset. If you wrote down "Bowsette" for Rarity's costume. How on earth could she had picked that one specific label out of six others at random?

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like I said, she did it by accident.

11026597
I meant if she didn't make the mistake and wrote seven different names. She said she wrote down Bowsette for Rarity but expected her to pick it out of hat mix in with 6 other labels.

11026634
look, i was trying to make this story as close to the comic it was based off of.

rainbow dash had to wear a dress anyway

11027054
Ik, but it still wasn't all bad in the end. :ajsmug:

Btw, sorry for taking so long to answer your comment.

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