This story is a sequel to A Friend in Need
It's a 3 day weekend for Sunset and Twilight, and their first weekend as a couple following their previous rough night. They've got many great things planned for this fun weekend so let's see what this new couple has planned. Will it go well without any problems? Let's hope it won't and that they don't end up fighting.
Set in the SciSet Chronicles timeline
Cover art by omame0521
I refuse to believe they'll get into an argument.
fight against a magical menace maybe, but not a single argument between them, you hear?
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I might think of something or change it I'm still new at writing stories on this site.
I'm happy for them. Off to a cute start.
Cute, I love it :) Great job
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Thx glad you enjoyed it
Wow just wow. BEST. STORY. EVER!! I think this is the best Sciset story I ever read 🤩🤩😍😍
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Why thx I've read plenty in sciset stories the last year and added what would be a perfect thing to add to the story with the fighting and lots of emotion.
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Thank you. FOR MAKING THE BEST STORY IN EXISTENCE! You made a good choice writing a Sciset story. I usually have trouble writing about them so that's why two of my stories have my original characters as the main focus 😂😂
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why thx.
I finally finished it. I thought this was awesome.
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Glad you enjoyed it
Even though I read this story first I really enjoy it
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I see but still glad you enjoyed it
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I can't wait for the 3rd part if there is
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I'll be doing more in the future. Thinking on doing a story that takes place after this once. Not sure when it'll be out but I'm still doing it.
Alright, I need to point out a few things
First off, your grammar is pretty terrible, the actual punctuation is fine but the wording of some phrases, the use of / in general and the structure of some sentences need work.
Secondly, you tend to repeat words often. It's a bit noticeable
That being said, the story was cute, it was written well enough for an inexperienced author, and I think you could do well in the future. If you haven't already i'd highly recommend trying to find a proofreader.
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I'm new to this ok but people are enjoying it ok.
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of course, i'm not exactly too experienced myself. Keep at it, your stories are cute.
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thx gonna be writing another one in the coming weeks and another one for christmas. Might try and a get third one too before new years. Gonna see what happens since I'm in my first year of college.
Was that a reference to "My Past is Not Today"?
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kinda but it was changed a bit.
Not sure if anyone knew this but I hide a MLP friendship is magic reference that was in this final chapter. Won't say much except that it happened in season 9 of the show and not gonna share anything on this so if anyone wants to figure out where the scene was referenced from a mlp fim episode go ahead and you might even get a shout out in a future post I make.
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What I thought it was funny when I did it
i refuse to ship sunset shimmer with anyone but twilight sparkle
they were and always will be made for each other
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Ik
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Me too.
Btw, sorry it took so long to respond to your comment but I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Confessed.
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It explains what happened in the previous chapter.
they going a little fast their sunset just had a mental health crisis an attempted suicide that's a call the doctors or at least the rest of the gang for help
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The second one you mention happens in the next chapter.
80’s? 80’s?! 80’s?!
YOU THINK THAT IS HOT?! YOU TRY LIVING IN 110 DEGREE WEATHER AND THEN TELL ME IF THATS HOT
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I know, I have family in Arizona and I've been wondering how they've been doing regarding the heat wave that's been going on the last few weeks.