(Spoilers for those who still haven't seen My Little Pony: A New Generation yet. Featured from 11/09/21 to 11/10/21.)
Sunny Starscout and her friends have managed to restore magic to Equestria by getting the three pony tribes to unite again. It seems like all is right with the world as far as most ponies are concerned.
But Sunny still wonders what could've caused the bright future Princess Twilight Sparkle had planned for Equestria to fall apart, and how the ponies could've grown to fear and hate each other. And her search for answers yields an unusual result in the form of Princess Twilight herself.
Being brought into an Equestria so different from her own, Twilight is confronted with a horrifying fact: Her legacy has been tainted, defined by the collapse of harmony between ponies after her time. And Sunny will soon learn just what it is that Princess Twilight was trying to do to keep the ponies together.
That's always been a lot of question that people want the answer what went wrong and what caused this whole Mayhem and what happened to the other creatures as well
Whoa that is so like Pinocchio power like like what the Blue Fairy did dang that's some power
Look I still spank her wings and Horn is elusive like if anybody remember how her horn and wings are like just glowing I think they're just temporarily until she activate them I'm just saying
Great story of how g4 lead to g5 there. Though don’t worry the real explanation on how Equestria of the future came to be will be revealed in time, because there will be a 44 minute special coming out on spring 2022 and the. After that a tv show that takes place after the movie so we can have more adventures of g5 and find out the mysteries and get answers on how Twilight and her friends legacy was replaced with fear and paranoia and how the ponies and all creatures were divided.
Great job on this latest one shot. Definitely appreciated the work that went into the exchange, characterizations and other details. Really appreciated Sunny's reflections on how things have changed for the better in such a short time (and I am definitely glad the lighthouse was repaired) as well as wondering how things got that bad anyway. REALLY liked Sunny getting the idea to see if see if she could talk to Twilight in the dream world. At least Twilight was honest enough to admit she made some pretty big mistakes (one of them being ignoring certain rumors for longer than she should have). And, yeah, I could see Twilight getting inspiration from Sunset's adopted world concerning the technology only for the technology to ultimately end up doing more harm than good because of growing distrust. And, yeah, I could see how the Equestrian throne could have had some preservation magic that kept the rulers from aging until they stepped down (i.e. being an alicorn in itself does not grant increased longevity) AND how Twilight could have gotten the idea for the separated crystal only shared with trusted others.
And, on another note, it would be deliciously ironic if the other species (dragons, changelings, griffons, etc.) actually all stayed united, but lived in secret, in contrast to the ponies (thanks, in part, to the teachings of Spike, Smolder [who, being dragons {i.e. an extremely long lived race}, MIGHT actually be still alive] and the descendants of the rest of the Young Six) and it was this unity that kept the Windigos in check.
Also kind of have the theory that Celestia and Luna merged with the sun and moon respectively after they died and made sure the aforementioned sun and moon continued to raise and lower on their own regularly. Of course, it IS just a theory.
And, yeah, we don't know yet if Sunny's wings and horn are permanent or just an occasionally used super mode, but her having the ability to activate them at will with enough concentration seems like a logical way to cover our bases one way or the other.
But, anyway, thanks very much for sharing this and I am certainly looking forward to more of your work in general.
So apparently Sunny is still worried about this whole responsibility that she has to take on so she basically use her power to awaken Twilight from her doll which apparently it works but only temporarily she told her about the past events of what torn apart the other ponies and creature but she still believes that there is still hope that someday they will be peace and harmony and she believes that sunny can do this alongside with her friends this was a pretty good story keep up the good work
Seriously this person Mixmaster226 really needs to mind his own business and stop trolling people here because right now it's really getting annoying
This was pretty good. I like your head canon as to how the tribes separated; it’s certainly realistic enough.
But please do me a favor— don’t use exclamation points in a third-person narrative. If you were narrating in first person it would be different since it would be your protagonist’s (Sunny’s) mindset and she could be excited, but an outside omniscient narrator shouldn’t do that— they already know what’s going to happen and wouldn’t be surprised.
I know a lot of people do that, but… they really shouldn’t.
Otherwise, good job!
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Well, you're the way you choose to be, after all. It would appear that this guy you're talking about has chosen most unwisely.
Nice. Would you ever write about g5 and changlings
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Wow really you read th story too. That’s amazing thid comment changes everything. Sarcasm Seriously I don’t think a recap is necessary
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Yeah he does that with every chapter he comments on.
A good story, I only wish the part where Sunny "brings back" Twilight would have been a bit expanded upon, as it stands it was just *finger-snap* and suddenly Twilight is back from the beyond. Other than that little nitpick, I definitely like the idea that Twilight and Co had a hoof in the downfall of Equestria, not out of any malicious deeds but just the little errors and pitfalls that make them relatable as characters. And yeah, as cool as it would be to be remembered in stories and stuff, I can definitely see Twilight's point that legends are all well and good so long as you remember the ponies/people behind the legends. Something else that occurred to me is that for all that ponykind preached friendship and tolerance, they were something of a "By Ponies, For Ponies" sort of deal, the TRIO OF DOOM was able to split the tribes with not much effort, so it stands to reason that Equestria was far FAR from what they pretended to be on the surface. Kind of like humans, we have far too many groups who preach love, tolerance, friendship, and in one or two examples, pastel ponies, but that's only so long as the other party looks and acts and thinks like them.