Hm, nice progress, good to see that he finally arrived at Avias. Gonna be interesting to see what he will do from there. Interesting to see that what he sees is truly as cartoony as he thought. Makes me wonder how others truly perceive him. Does he somehow seem more solid then others, maybe?
Btw, I would suggest getting an editor to look through this chapter. So many spelling mistakes.
Except for that, keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading more of your chapters.
3934811 Yes, it is alive. Sometimes I can not believe it my self. In the earlier chapters I wrote how the locals perceive him. They do not see any difference in their perception of reality, the only thing that is distinctive about him besides the obvious is how his scars are more highlighted and focused. Certain details that most would not really notice are more clearer and obvious to them. Those scar marks are some of the reasons why the others are so cautious of him.
I write with spell check so I do not really know how those happen. And because I write so slowly, I am fairly certain that the editor would just quit by the time I am done. Although now I am definitely going to have to reread my work twice.
For some reason this fic is way better than I remember it being... So either you've improved on your writing, or I've had to deal with so many crap HiE's that I've really started to appreciate fics that aren't just fantasy self-inserts.
I'm just gonna assume it's a combination of both...
Reading isn't as tiresome as it used to be with the walls of text in the first chapters, but there are still some portions of text that just are so long and my eyes drown in them.
Huzzah! It is alive!
Hm, nice progress, good to see that he finally arrived at Avias. Gonna be interesting to see what he will do from there.
Interesting to see that what he sees is truly as cartoony as he thought. Makes me wonder how others truly perceive him. Does he somehow seem more solid then others, maybe?
Btw, I would suggest getting an editor to look through this chapter. So many spelling mistakes.
Except for that, keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading more of your chapters.
3934811 Yes, it is alive. Sometimes I can not believe it my self.
In the earlier chapters I wrote how the locals perceive him. They do not see any difference in their perception of reality, the only thing that is distinctive about him besides the obvious is how his scars are more highlighted and focused. Certain details that most would not really notice are more clearer and obvious to them. Those scar marks are some of the reasons why the others are so cautious of him.
I write with spell check so I do not really know how those happen. And because I write so slowly, I am fairly certain that the editor would just quit by the time I am done. Although now I am definitely going to have to reread my work twice.
He could probably become a famous artist
Btw it is good to see that you still work on this!
3938444 Thanks, I do try to keep it alive and kicking.
For some reason this fic is way better than I remember it being... So either you've improved on your writing, or I've had to deal with so many crap HiE's that I've really started to appreciate fics that aren't just fantasy self-inserts.
I'm just gonna assume it's a combination of both...
3941721 Thank you, I definitely like the idea of my writing getting better. Although I would probably be lying to myself if I say that it did.
Reading isn't as tiresome as it used to be with the walls of text in the first chapters, but there are still some portions of text that just are so long and my eyes drown in them.
5541676 I will keep that in mind for the next chapter.
Had to go back and skim this chapter to follow the newly released one. Will read the new one a bit later.