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bahatumay


Simultaneously able to type 94 wpm and still take five years to finish a story. If you're feeling generous, throw a ko-fi at me.

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Octave failed his flight test, like so many before him. Three hooves down. The Rainbow Factory promises one exit for him.

But one of the workers there might be able to give him a second option.


Third place winner in the Rainbow Factory 10 year anniversary contest.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 4 )

Thank you for your entry! We look forward to reading it, and best of luck.

It was interesting to finally see POV character who was trapped in that cages.

And ultimate conclusion was expected... Factory gives you hope... and Factory takes it back and shatters it on billion pieces...

Good job.

This was fun to read.

The small glimmer of hope is seen, but too late does one realize the façade that despair wears.

Great work.

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