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False Door


If you like feeling awful, you've come to the right place.

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Princess Cadance becomes rudely aware of a tryst between Shining Armor and Queen Chrysalis.

Short, one scene convo between Cadance and Shining.

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Well this is interesting wonder if it's a foal or a filly. Poor shinning I understand why cadence is so angry but I really understand why he wanted to avoid the talk especially with him being kinda mindcontroled at the time and chrysalis having cadences form.

Princess really has no right to be angry at him with him essentially being violatedand her belittling it makes it even worse in my eyes

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I think Cadance has mostly misplaced anger and is Just taking it out on Shining. Hopefully she'll figure that out. Also I think I wrote "he" in reference to the spawn.

Love the cover art.

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Thanks! I do all my own covers.

This is pretty good feel soo sorry for Shining.

Would really enjoy a followup.

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Glad you liked it. The original idea was a story where Shining's unknown bastard changeling son seeks him out which throws a wrench into his life. Don't know if his son would be malicious or misunderstood. Don't know if it would end with everything torn asunder or reconciliation and the forming of a new family. Cadance/Shining/Pincer/Flurry if she's there? This confrontation scene was what I was most excited about so I just wrote it as stand alone. If the rest of the story develops some day I can always revisit it.

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Shining having a kid with Chrissy is something i quite like the idea of and how it would develop it has a lot of potential with how it could go. Could he accept the kid as his own and want to raise/care for them or would he reject. How would Cadance handle things would she want to try and care for the kid or outright reject them. I have read afew fics with covers the topic abit but there is soo much potential in the idea.

Having the kid show up randomly as say a teen is not something i have read but would certainly be interesting. Not sure what would be more traumatic for characters rising a bastard child from foal or them coming into the life later. both would be very different but very interesting stores.

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Do you take commissions?

11170924
Ummm... I'm totally open to doing that. DM me with details and I can come up with some sort of arrangement.

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thanks I'll send them when ready, some day. :pinkiesmile:

judging by that ending, something tells me that pincer probably shouldn't be raised around cadence if he wants to avoid any potential emotional torment.

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I'm sure he'll live in the hive, a possible looming threat to claim Crystal Kingdom as Shining's bastard

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EEEEEEEEEE! It's you! It's so weird seeing you in this particular story because your first submission, Lost in the Night was the first fanfic I remember liking enough to favorite. I found it on Fanfiction.net before I knew about this place and before I was even writing pony stories at all. It's like my fanfiction journey just came full circle.

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