You Are My Sunshine

by HiddenEntity

Bonus: Police Report

Zephyr Heights Police Department
Victim Report

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Reporting:

Officer Reporting: Deputy Martin Strongwing

Department Chief: Chief Gordon Stormstrike

Regiment: 12th

Details:

Date: 04/06/2098 (April 6, 2098)

Time Reported: 09:23

Victim: Argyle Starshine

Race: Earth

Sex: Male

The prisoner was let free by Princess Zephyrina Storm, and reports from her say he fell off the edge of the cliff. When we arrived, his body was mangled and blood was spattered all over the rocks. We sent a minister to the Earth Ponies and agreed to put aside our differences momentarily to deliver the corpse of Argyle to them. We were lucky nothing happened.

Comments

[Dashie04]

That’s quite the interesting story. Loved the formatting choices throughout.

[HiddenEntity]

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It might be short and rushed, but it was the best I could squeeze out, I've been trying to write stuff and well, let's just say it's starting to turn out a lil crappy.

[Dashie04]

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You can always read EzN’s writing guide if you’re really stuck.

[BirdsBooksBrownies]

This is a much darker turn than that of Canon G5 thus far. That said I hope you continue this story (no rush mind you) because I actually felt furious at Phyllis in the first chapter and wanted to punch her. Anything that can evoke such an immediate reaction is good writing in my mind.

[HiddenEntity]

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Oh, I'm going to be adding more to The Argyleverse, probably one with a Phyllis and Sprout fic showing their relationship in this universe. It's mostly set before canon right now, so I don't think it's going to bring forth an AU at all.

[BirdsBooksBrownies]

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I meant more that from what we've seen so far in G5 this appears to be putting a darker spin on what went down. Still, If what you wrote here is anything to go by, it will be an intense ride