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KarmaSentinal


Inspiring drifter in the sea of the written language.

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Blink and the world has changed. Blink again, and you may find yourself left behind. Blink a final time, and your no longer needed.


A very short idea involving a theory I have about events leading from Gen 4 -Gen 5.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

I thought you'd like to know there's a typo in the short description. Italics don't work properly in the short descriptiin box for some reason.

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Immersion ruined.

Implement corrective procedures...

Emergency action initiated. Deleting story in 3...2...1...

Emergency action failed.

Alright, I'll go and fix it. :derpytongue2:

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Thanks buddy. Trying new writing styles with this one. The goal was to see what kind of atmosphere I could possibly create in as few words as possible. So, I take it the story wasn't too bad?

tbh I prefer when it ends suddenly and violently. This gradual change is just too sad

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