"Twilight I understand your confused but you didn't have to deal with his kind before." "What there were humans here before?" The group asks. "Yes humans lived here up untill almost one thousand years ago when they disappeared but prior to that just after Luna's banishment they went to war with us for reasons unknown to me l. It was some of the bloodiest gruesome battles I've ever seen. They fought like warriors possessed by demons never turning away or running just kept pushing, I'll never understand why Luna loved them so much, but if one is here that means they might come back and I can't let that happen. Take him away!" The princess says while getting salutes from the guards. As the guards take Andrew away to go back to canterlot twilight and the group were just staring into space trying to process what was said.
Not only is this a fucking annyoing hie cliche that should just fucking die. It doesn't even fit in story since Celestia wasn't like this towards him before in the story, Great, you contradicted Celestia's behavior towards him to force in another annoying and hated cliche instead of doing something more original and help give this frankly mediocre written fic something to give it more merit to read. Well done you just made it completely unpleasant to read now. Good bye.
11585459 Well if you don't like it that is fine but if you remember he never once went outside when she was there the first time and I more than likely wasn't keeping it that way through out the story
11585563 The way it was written made it seem like she knew she was not dealing with a pony at all, but now you are telling me she did? Like i said it felt like you decided out of the blue to jump through hoops to fulfil your quota for annoying hie and anthro fic cliches in spite of the fact they are so overused to the point that the dead horse's ashes are nonexistent at this point, but no gotta start destroying the ground the horse was lying on too her de der! It's like come on man. Just because it's a cliche doesn't mean you have to use it too and literlly force the story and jump through hoops just to have it happen in a forced way just because. You are better than that!
11585690 Fair enough honestly I just wanted to try something and see where it went I don't spend enough time writing due to work and crap and I'm trying to take more time with my other stories while this is just a lets see where it goes spur of the moment writing thing idk if you've read the other stories or not so idk whether or not you'd like em and like I said if it's not your cup of tea that's fine I like the feed back any way lets me know how I can change certain things in the long run or what direction to take with a story
You f******* bitch!
Luna needs to f****** slap her racist/xenophobic sister to the wall!
Not only is this a fucking annyoing hie cliche that should just fucking die. It doesn't even fit in story since Celestia wasn't like this towards him before in the story, Great, you contradicted Celestia's behavior towards him to force in another annoying and hated cliche instead of doing something more original and help give this frankly mediocre written fic something to give it more merit to read. Well done you just made it completely unpleasant to read now. Good bye.
11585459
Well if you don't like it that is fine but if you remember he never once went outside when she was there the first time and I more than likely wasn't keeping it that way through out the story
11585563
The way it was written made it seem like she knew she was not dealing with a pony at all, but now you are telling me she did? Like i said it felt like you decided out of the blue to jump through hoops to fulfil your quota for annoying hie and anthro fic cliches in spite of the fact they are so overused to the point that the dead horse's ashes are nonexistent at this point, but no gotta start destroying the ground the horse was lying on too her de der! It's like come on man. Just because it's a cliche doesn't mean you have to use it too and literlly force the story and jump through hoops just to have it happen in a forced way just because. You are better than that!
11585690
Fair enough honestly I just wanted to try something and see where it went I don't spend enough time writing due to work and crap and I'm trying to take more time with my other stories while this is just a lets see where it goes spur of the moment writing thing idk if you've read the other stories or not so idk whether or not you'd like em and like I said if it's not your cup of tea that's fine I like the feed back any way lets me know how I can change certain things in the long run or what direction to take with a story
I wanna punch celestia. She seemed so nice to him before. Guess she was just being two-faced.