• Member Since 8th Sep, 2012
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Matrixbeast


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A story of Cadance's trapping inside the caves beneath Canterlot with no dialogue, no singing, and simply desperation.

This is basically my first attempt at a story, so criticism is welcome.

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As much as I found this slightly confusing, I liked it! :yay:

Quite well written I think some of the paragraphs could have been broken up more for an easier read and there were afew sentences where a more "fancy" word might have worked better, still, overall I quite liked this.

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