A story of Cadance's trapping inside the caves beneath Canterlot with no dialogue, no singing, and simply desperation.
This is basically my first attempt at a story, so criticism is welcome.
A story of Cadance's trapping inside the caves beneath Canterlot with no dialogue, no singing, and simply desperation.
This is basically my first attempt at a story, so criticism is welcome.
As much as I found this slightly confusing, I liked it!
Quite well written I think some of the paragraphs could have been broken up more for an easier read and there were afew sentences where a more "fancy" word might have worked better, still, overall I quite liked this.