• Member Since 12th Aug, 2020
  • offline last seen Apr 18th, 2023

23LEvans


E

Asterix’ village along with the Roman camps of Totorum, Laudanum, Aquarium and Compenduim are sent to equestria due to a failed spell by twilight,

I almost feel sorry for the royal guards most of my sorry for the Romans is already at its limit.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 31 )

this is gonna drive Twilight crazy.

These Authors are crazy.

So many spelling mistakes and awful grammar. Painful.

Viva le Asterix!

I see this as a good start. ,😆

Oh dear, BBBFF is in trouble. Wait until Twilight hears about this!!!

That's a really funny crossover, I honestly can't imagine how it can evolve but I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

LMAO!!! Ponies and romans get thrashed by the Gauls again. But for Rainbow Dash, I hope she doesn't break down that easily just because she lost.

Updates ?????

New chapters ????

11103176
It’s coming don’t worry might take a while, school is coming up and I’m doing my A levels

11104016
will the romans have siege towers and rams or catapults in their fields ?????

11104020
they don’t appear often in the Asterix comics but I’ll see if I can put them in

11104263
to the reason that in comics they are not often seen in fact I was referring to animated and non-animated asterix films. just to clarify

11104833
Thanks for clarifying and I will see if I can put the seige engines in

I hope not to disturb you but I just wanted your opinion on these ideas: how do you see their druid meeting zzcora the zebra ????
and if you spike the dragon by chance drinking the magic poziome ?????
would you ever put pictures of the formations of the Roman legions ???
to be clear I don't want to tell you how to write your story, these are just suggestions or questions I asked myself while reading it

11111080
I’ll see about these ideas good suggestions, after my A levels

A levels ?????

11111450
or sorry for not understanding and good luck 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

11104833

animated and non-animated asterix films

Do those things really exist?

11284029
Yes there are some live action Asterix films in existence

THE PUNS!!!!!

LOL!! That Rainbow Dash, she never learns does she?! :twilightoops:

“Wait the minute!” Asterix exclaimed In horror as he looked around, “Where’s our bard?!”

Run!

Begging your pardon, as much as this is an entertaining read, I would much prefer if you could separate the conversations between characters into different paragraphs to make it easy to keep track as to who is talking.

For example, here is yours:

“Huh” Rarity huffed indignantly, “well excuse me for having some class…”, “enough” snapped a new voice, walking up to the party was Princess luna herself, “grrr” dogmatic growled, “no dogmatic Sit” Obelix told his pet dogmatic day but still glared at the princess. “Princess Luna” the pony’s bowed, “hello ma’am” the gauls said politely, “you must bow” Twilight hissed, “she may be your princess but i’m a gaulish chief and don’t bow to anyone. Whether it be Caesar himself or the princess in front of me”.

Try this instead:

“Huh” Rarity huffed indignantly, “well excuse me for having some class-”

“Enough” snapped a new voice, walking up to the party was Princess Luna herself.

Dogmatic gave a growl. “No dogmatic, sit!” Obelix told his pet dogmatic day but still glared at the princess.

“Princess Luna,” the pony’s bowed.

“Hello ma’am,” the Gauls said politely.

“You must bow,” Twilight hissed.

“She may be your princess but I’m a Gaulish chief and don’t bow to anyone," replied Vitalstatistix, "Whether it be Caesar himself or the princess in front of me."

This way it's much easier to pick up who is talking.

Out of curiosity, is English not your first language/maiden tongue?

11385795
Not as crazy as that Gaul Bard. LMAO!!! It almost sounded like that the bard lost his memory after getting struck by Obelix's merhir!!!

11385872
Thanks for the advise, I will use it for later chapters. And stories

Cacophanix has been

Rock Rolled?:pinkiegasp:

Login or register to comment