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Can't tell if bad troll or...

Really, really bad troll... :rainbowhuh:

Well, this was the best story I ever read

zel

1238056>>1239453>>1239456
OC? Check.
Alicorn? Check.
Red and Black? Check.
Needs to save Equestria? Check.
Sex? Check.
Zombies? Check.
Pseudo-gore? Check.
Bad grammar? Check.
Development speed fastest force in the universe? Check.
Livedhappilyeverafter? Check.
No point: Check.
FEATURE BOX GUARANTEEDdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Sweetie_Belle_lolface.png

I don't even... :ajbemused: Bad troll is bad... or... I don't know. Celestia help me.

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Looks like she can't understand either.

There is a reason your son is picked on. He can't write. :rainbowlaugh: This has a shot of becoming a legendary badfic.

1239460 Welcome to FIMFiction!

So we've got a bad trollfic?

Why do the mods let this kind of stuff get through...

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1239571 Your picture isnt showing up :fluttercry:

1239598 You assume i havent?
Just tell me :scootangel:

1239610 Its the image not loaded image isn't it :ajbemused:

The title made me stop and reexamine my outlook on life.

loldongs, I fucking love you. Have my babies.

loldongs is a god among my people. This is the single greatest literary piece in all the land. :pinkiehappy:

1239455
WHAT ARE YOU DOING YOU MEDIOCRE DUNCES

Writing a good trollfic is not the same as writing an obvious trollfic.
And Raven Dark'ness Dementia Way would like to have a word with you later.

Epic troll fic is epic. I shall do a reading of this for my Youtube channel if you don't mind. :rainbowkiss:

y dus no1 get dat dis iz trolfic ??? :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

WTF WHI PEEPLES HATT MAY STORI! I GUD RITR! :applecry:

1239453>>1239481>>1239484>>1239586>>1239592>>1239620>>1240236>>1240410>>1240583 WY PEEPLES SAE IM TROLL, YU HATTERS ND TROLLS! :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

1239523 I TELE MAY DAD N U! :fluttercry:

1239456>>1239664>>1239738>>1239782 U GIZ MACK MI HIPPY, HAV MUSTASH :moustache:

1240705 dis is da gratest stori iv evr red.
pls mak mor.

Gonna say this again.
Needs more spelling errors.

1240705
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You really ought to tone the crazy back a bit if you want folks to take you seriously and become successful at trolling.

And if you haven't contacted Raven Dark'ness Dementia Way, you really should. You two would have a lot to talk about .

1240705 STOP PLZ STOP!!!!!!!1 I BEG YOU!!!!!!

Oh look! Another poorly spelled trollfic.

Wanker.

1240705 Sir, I can hardly understand what your saying. Please, at the very least try to spell correctly.

1240410 Huhuhuhuhuh! BAGELZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HATE BAGELZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1248652
Oh noes. Not dis ninja again!:trollestia::ajsleepy:

1248662 U SHALL FEEL THE WRATH OF ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! By the way, on your slender man video, you looked a whole lot different then I thought. Even if you're funny, I still hate bagelz!!!!!!!!!!!!!

came for the hate
left for the bad failtrollfic

XiF

1246470 Wow. You people are mean. :twilightangry2:

1240410 I must listen to it when it comes out. :moustache:

Oh god the terrible spelling hurts my eyes as does the character. Excuse me I'll just go a weep for the idiocy of people then :raritycry::pinkiesick:

Wow, all the pain he caused me made me forget to give him a thumbs down.

1239621>>1239673 The image does not appear because it is hosted on funnyjunk :moustache:

zel

1723147 It was back when I did not know that FJ shits on embed :moustache:

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