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Johng117


I like Kaiju, Ponies, and Anime. If you're interested, you can find my illustrations for my stories here: http://johng117.deviantart.com/

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Didn't realize your remastering this

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really? Well, I guess I only did mention doing it once in a blog. I guess if you're following other stuff, you kinda skim over it or ignore it and never know.

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That's ok are redoing the the story just fixing some things the original was getting a little dark not that I'm complaining or anything just curious?

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Well, my plan is to make some changes that I think may help the story narratively. It's still gonna be dark, but I'm gonna try to be less 'edgey' with it and balance out the dark with some light hearted stuff.

I especially want to flesh out the characters' relationships early on. The original story will serve as a guide on where I was going and some of it won't be too radically different since it's where the story is meant to go. If that makes sense.

You did the cover art yourself? That’s some good drawing skills you have.

This will be interesting

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Yeah it was me. I'm not that great, but thanks :twilightblush:

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Don’t doubt yourself so much. I think it’s a pretty good drawing and one you should be proud of. Or at the very least content with how well it turned out with your current level of drawing skills. It’s way better then I ever could do that’s for sure.

And sure while it may not be the best dewing out there it’s really far away from being anywhere near the worst.

Remember that you can always improve. Just keep practicing.
Also sometimes our biggest critique can be ourselves.

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appreciate it. One thing I'm looking forward to with this remaster is that I get to illustrate certain scenes in a chapter. Hopefully I can get some good practice in on that.

Ooooo. Nice intro

You go Gojira. Take down Nightmare Moon

Goji is gonna be happy there..also more stressed lol

Glad Goji has a job. Those shop owners can eat dirt. At least one of them had the balls to speak the real reason why they didn't hire him.

"I was hoping this would be a good excuse to get him and Twilight to meet," said Celestia, disappointed by the outcome.

Damn. Another "Celestia The Manipulator/Puppet Master/Queen of Lies".

“Do you think he could be her secret love child?" whispered Rarity
Rarity you aren’t Todoroki you can’t just suggest stuff like that.

Glad to see Goji having some of his own people around

Oh my god, I have feelings this crazy loco woman is going to be pain in the ***

OH fuck. That picture. That woman looks crazy

…why does the name Kenpachi Kenra sound familiar to me?

Loved the tender moment with Twilight and Goji

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thanks. sorry that this took so long. Had a bit of a lazy streak during this cold season lol

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It's fine. No need to say sorry. It happens sometimes

Holy S**t! I'm hyped! :raritystarry:

Will this story be as long as The Bridge?

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Can't say for sure. Right now I'm trimming the narrative fat that plagued the old version of this story so it's more focused and not as bloated. I'm up to chapter 23 in regards of being roughed out.

I currently have 6 chapters and 4 anthology chapters (prequels) proof read and almost ready to be published. I'm just trying to do one last check for spelling and grammar and maybe get some illustrations done for them.

Biolante when?

Also, when Kiryu?

Finally got around to read this new version.

By the way, do you want my help editing this? The narrative gets a bit awkward at certain points.

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sure, if you got the time. Always appreciate input.

"I'd like to think that not all of them are our enemy. That may sound naïve on my part, but I don't believe that anyone is born evil," said Celestia.

... My oc Amara Elymas was literally born pure evil so I find that a little bull.

Please, don't tell me that Erica is the same woman attack gojira. Good job the story. But I do wonder what is so important the golden dragon?

"He is the vengeful hammer for the arrogant. Those species who pronounce themselves as lords of creation, will be struck down by his devein fury."
Metphies. Godzilla: Planet of the Monsters

Feel like I've seen that mans face before. The one with the Golden Dragon

Thank You left a part about the hot springs bro.

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Huh? What do you mean?

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How Gojira was introduced to the hot springs.
Original Arrogance of Man Chapter 9. Page three I believe.

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Oh. Well since this was an overhaul, I didn't think it was necessary at the time I wrote this, as to focus more on the conflict of MONARCH having their attention being drawn to Ponyville.

What happened to the chapter 10? Was posted and now gone.

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I posted a journal on my account but I'll tell ya what happened to save time.

Basically, I screwed up the numbering of the chapters that I had edited that were sitting and waiting to be published. The one that's missing was not supposed to come up yet, as there's some stuff that happens beforehand. So sorry about that :twilightsheepish:

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Cool cool, can’t wait to read it

What I can wait is a certain Kaiju. Hint he is the grim reaper of the Godzilla world.

Good job on story, look like the mutants have finally come out of the shadows. Rodan the and angirasu having fun their lives.

The teenagers comprised of two boys. One blond, tall and well built, and dressed in white. Another boy, tall, lanky, and with shaggy brown hair. Among these boys were two girls. One was short, sporting a bobcut, a pair of thick glasses, and an orange frumpy sweater. The other was red head, as lovely as could be. She was dressed in a violet dress.

Gee, wonder who they can be…wait…we’re missing a member.

Scooby-Doo! Where are you!?

"So, what did you guys get? I got five pieces of candy!" said a little Valkyrie girl dressed as a witch.

"I got a chocolate bar!" said an Earth bound girl in a white sheet with eye holes cut out from the front.

"I got a bit!" exclaimed an Elf boy dressed as a zombie. An Earth bound boy with a white sheet over him with multiple eye holes all around reached into his bag.

"I got a rock." said the boy dejectedly, pulling out a palm sized rock from his bag.

Wow, pulling out all the stops. First the Scooby-Doo gang and now The Peanuts.

Gotta give credit to Gojira here. I would not have had the patience to compromise with Pinkie regarding a party. I’d have just said “No party” and ended that conversation there and then. Better person than I am, that’s for sure.

And is that a dose of PTSD I see there? Wow…much much much more noticeable in this story than the previous version. Previous version was still amazing, I must say. But you’re really putting in an effort to show the full spectrum of the struggles these guys have to face and deal with. I like that. I like that a lot.

"Nah. The cold never bothered me anyway," said Junior, continuing his labor. The girl giggled in amusement.

Don’t you dare. I see what that is, the bait that’s dangling there. Don’t you do it…

"Let it go~. Let it go~," Fluttershy sang. Junior raised a brow at her. But, he sighed in dismay, once he realized the cause of the girl's amusement.

Aaaaand you did it. Of course you did.

Nothing against the movie. But that was a bit cheesy and easy.

"I'll keep you safe. I promise," whispered Celestia.

First: Pretty sure he’s gonna be the one protecting you once he’s older and grows into his power.

Second: You shouldn’t make a promise if you know you can’t keep it. (Side note: say what you want about the Halo games, the first three were amazing and great, and filled with lines just as amazing and great)

Third: Oh, Celestia…if only you knew what had happened. If only you knew the truth. Maybe then you’d know and understand how nigh impossible your promise is.

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