so the long road to find the legend has started. lets see how it'll play out in the end. not to mention how the dks likes spike's 'going away' presents.
He looked around at the city from up in the air. He smirked beneath his mask, and spoke, “I think I can have some fun before I take off.” and so Spike flew off into the night.
The journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.
Also, the girls and Harmony were all one and the same. Good to know. And they all got through to Spike's frozen heart faster than Yue to Hajime from Arifureta...or at the very least, they've convinced him to let them tag along.
10907166 Look. Don't get me wrong. I'm glad Spike's got his overdue payback. But knowing those jerks, they'll spread slanders and say that Spike's a menace and determine to make him a public enemy number 1...
Of course, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna will know otherwise...too bad some guards are more willing to agree to disagree...
Don't mind me, I'm just writing a delusional comment here: I read the Under the Purple Hood fanfic that the author was inspired by. I see that, unlike that fanfiction, here Wildcard made the girls reveal from the very first chapters that they care about a person that many others don't care about. Well I do not know. On the one hand, it's nice, but on the other, there is a lack of development. We do not know from what moment they suddenly began to worry about people. After all, no matter what these eight girls may say, they are not able to truly understand people. After all, he main girls have never been in Spike's shoes. They live well, consider them rolling like cheese in butter. And suddenly they are ready to give up their usual life for the sake of one person with whom they did not even communicate, but only sent him food, clothes, and the other things under a pseudonym (and the girls don't even know if this Garden really exists). Looks a little silly, doesn't it? In the above story (sorry, if anyone has a small spoiler), the girls do not communicate with Spike at first either, but over time, watching his life, they get to know Spike better and slowly but surely begin to rethink their attitude towards him. And although in places everything is going too harshly in relation to Spike, but there the development of relations between Spike and those girls is clearly present.
I hope I haven't offended anyone with my opinion. I am not saying that the story is disgusting. No, I like the beginning of the story (especially the logical desire of Spike to leave this shitty place and take revenge on his offenders before that). I will continue to follow the story with great interest. Let's see where it goes. Good luck with writing it, Wildcard!)
so the long road to find the legend has started. lets see how it'll play out in the end. not to mention how the dks likes spike's 'going away' presents.
Oh no...
The journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.
Also, the girls and Harmony were all one and the same. Good to know. And they all got through to Spike's frozen heart faster than Yue to Hajime from Arifureta...or at the very least, they've convinced him to let them tag along.
Hmmm...now lemme see.
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Oh YES!!!!!
The road for Spike and the Girls has begun! And it's going to be the most insane roads they ever been on! Let's hope they have a lovely day!
I'm so happy Spike get his payback to those who hurt him, especially those 3 dickheads and oh boy! It's a great payback!
At least, Spike is no longer a jerk toward the girls once they admits they are Harmony and the one who has been looking out for him the entire time.
The question is which girl that Spike will hook up with first?
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Look. Don't get me wrong. I'm glad Spike's got his overdue payback. But knowing those jerks, they'll spread slanders and say that Spike's a menace and determine to make him a public enemy number 1...
Of course, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna will know otherwise...too bad some guards are more willing to agree to disagree...
Don't mind me, I'm just writing a delusional comment here:
I read the Under the Purple Hood fanfic that the author was inspired by.
I see that, unlike that fanfiction, here Wildcard made the girls reveal from the very first chapters that they care about a person that many others don't care about.
Well I do not know. On the one hand, it's nice, but on the other, there is a lack of development. We do not know from what moment they suddenly began to worry about people. After all, no matter what these eight girls may say, they are not able to truly understand people. After all, he main girls have never been in Spike's shoes. They live well, consider them rolling like cheese in butter. And suddenly they are ready to give up their usual life for the sake of one person with whom they did not even communicate, but only sent him food, clothes, and the other things under a pseudonym (and the girls don't even know if this Garden really exists). Looks a little silly, doesn't it?
In the above story (sorry, if anyone has a small spoiler), the girls do not communicate with Spike at first either, but over time, watching his life, they get to know Spike better and slowly but surely begin to rethink their attitude towards him. And although in places everything is going too harshly in relation to Spike, but there the development of relations between Spike and those girls is clearly present.
I hope I haven't offended anyone with my opinion. I am not saying that the story is disgusting. No, I like the beginning of the story (especially the logical desire of Spike to leave this shitty place and take revenge on his offenders before that).
I will continue to follow the story with great interest. Let's see where it goes. Good luck with writing it, Wildcard!)
Very nice chapter! Ready for more!
I think you meant he right?
Also spike
Ever heard of a warrant?
How, what they going to do shoot me. Oh wait they can’t.
I’m liking this more than I’ll Show Them All. This so far feels like that story done right.