Master Thief Dragon: We are the darkest Spike's Harem fic!
Feral World: Hold my gems.
I got to say this story start off dark since poor Spike deals with bullying and the only one who genuinely cares about him are the girls and surprisingly Neighsay of all people!
Hope Spike eventually warm up to the girls since this is harem fic… he can't be angry at them forever…
This story reminds me an anime where the main guy is an outcast and loser until he was betrayed by one of his classmates and they left him to rot until he came back as ultra-badass.... Arifuerta? But with post-apocalyptic elements.
Hope Spike came back as ultra-badass and give those bullies and anyone who look down on him comeuppance.
Anyway, what is the influence for this fic? Wildcard?
A Mad Max-style harem fic with Spike and the girls…. Intriguing.
I am interested on what MLP villains look like in this Mad Max-style world like Discord, Queen Chrysalis, King Sombra, Lord Tirek, Pony of Shadows, Storm King and Grogar… I wouldn't be surprised if one of them dress up as Immortan Joe! Imagine that!
Quite interesting, I like the backworld of a Zombie infection with some Mad Max touch. Glad I inspired you to make a fic like that, also I will keep an eye in the story, specially the development of the relationship with the girls. I'm sure you'll make a great story Wildcard. Have a nice day<3
Maybe its me, but when I found the main character's name is Spike Clawson, I was thinking "SWAT KATS: the Radical Squadron". Hell, even with Spike and Luster Dawn interactions,I could see her as Callie Briggs, since Spike could be Razor/Jake Clawson. Of course I also see a bit of Rogue Diamond as well with the setup. Definitely looking forward to more chapters of this.
Good beginning of the new story!) I know, this question may sound stupid, but I really wonder if Equestrians have hooves or arms and legs in addition to wings or horns? I have a feeling that they do have arms and legs since there is a tag Main 7 (EqG), but I'm not really sure...
10902969 Oh, yeah, sorry, I didn't notice that tag right away😅. Thank you! About the story itself, beginning is really good. The only thing that confuses me is the character of Pinkie Pie. I mean, she is Pinkie Pie! She always gives a good welcome for every newbie! It has always been a part of her character. But...in this story girls didn't talk to him until this moment. So it means that Pinkie didn't give a good welcome for Spike... I wonder why didn't she do that? Story says that a lot of Equestrians don't like humans. Was Pinkie afraid for her reputation or something?
The seventh one was a unicorn who had an amber coat, and her hair was a mix of red and blonde. She wore a black leather vest over an orange shirt, a magenta skirt, and punk-styled boots the same color as her vest. Her name was Sunset Shimmer; head of the school's disciplinary squad, and oldest daughter to Princess Celestia.
How many daughters does Celestia have? And who did she marry or have sex with exactly?
Clawson? I like that...though is his dad named clawman?....No? No?
Crickets sound in the distance.
Sighs dramatically.
Onward to read the chapter!
May the force be with you young Spike.
I like this very dark and edgy yet tragic in a way whether you dont know who is really in the wrong but i hope this story keeps going its very good
Is this a shield hero type story?
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No because there is no isekai plot where someone is reincarnated in another world
awesome chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter
Can't wait for more. I will keep a eye on this
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Really?
Wish it was
Master Thief Dragon: We are the darkest Spike's Harem fic!
Feral World: Hold my gems.
I got to say this story start off dark since poor Spike deals with bullying and the only one who genuinely cares about him are the girls and surprisingly Neighsay of all people!
Hope Spike eventually warm up to the girls since this is harem fic… he can't be angry at them forever…
This story reminds me an anime where the main guy is an outcast and loser until he was betrayed by one of his classmates and they left him to rot until he came back as ultra-badass.... Arifuerta? But with post-apocalyptic elements.
Hope Spike came back as ultra-badass and give those bullies and anyone who look down on him comeuppance.
Anyway, what is the influence for this fic? Wildcard?
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Was inspired by LuckyMagic's story Under the Purple Hood. With more of a Mad Max touch to it
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I see.
A Mad Max-style harem fic with Spike and the girls…. Intriguing.
I am interested on what MLP villains look like in this Mad Max-style world like Discord, Queen Chrysalis, King Sombra, Lord Tirek, Pony of Shadows, Storm King and Grogar… I wouldn't be surprised if one of them dress up as Immortan Joe! Imagine that!
Quite interesting, I like the backworld of a Zombie infection with some Mad Max touch. Glad I inspired you to make a fic like that, also I will keep an eye in the story, specially the development of the relationship with the girls. I'm sure you'll make a great story Wildcard. Have a nice day<3
Huh, no doubt the pandemic thing is slightly/practically based off our current events.
Plus this new story so far seems more violent and profane than the others. No offence Wildcard
Maybe its me, but when I found the main character's name is Spike Clawson, I was thinking "SWAT KATS: the Radical Squadron". Hell, even with Spike and Luster Dawn interactions,I could see her as Callie Briggs, since Spike could be Razor/Jake Clawson. Of course I also see a bit of Rogue Diamond as well with the setup. Definitely looking forward to more chapters of this.
Liking this store do far
Here's a song that would make a good opening for this story:
https://m.So it's like the bizarro version of Ladies Man on Campus?
Good beginning of the new story!)
I know, this question may sound stupid, but I really wonder if Equestrians have hooves or arms and legs in addition to wings or horns? I have a feeling that they do have arms and legs since there is a tag Main 7 (EqG), but I'm not really sure...
Anime
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The tag anthro is also in it, which means they're ponies but with human bodies
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Oh, yeah, sorry, I didn't notice that tag right away😅. Thank you!
About the story itself, beginning is really good.
The only thing that confuses me is the character of Pinkie Pie.
I mean, she is Pinkie Pie! She always gives a good welcome for every newbie! It has always been a part of her character.
But...in this story girls didn't talk to him until this moment. So it means that Pinkie didn't give a good welcome for Spike...
I wonder why didn't she do that? Story says that a lot of Equestrians don't like humans. Was Pinkie afraid for her reputation or something?
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Yes that's another reason why. Peer pressure from others
Is there gonna be a sex tag for this story?
Finally leaving but definite props for manning up to that garbage for so long. 👍
Dammmmm
How many daughters does Celestia have? And who did she marry or have sex with exactly?
Wait when did they first start to show care in him?
says the one who likes to spread gossip and believes it half the time.
Actually when did they start caring about him?
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Is their going to be a flashback to their childhood when they started to care for spike or started to like him?
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Maybe Sunset and Luster Dawn were adopted.