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Lunar Gaze


A guy who's new to fanfic writings. Hope you enjoy my fics.

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While Anon the human is trying to study for his college entrance exams, his little sister Flurry Heart is trying everything that she can to make her big brother hang out with her.

Cover art by: nonamenymous

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 6 )

I think your title is supposed to be "Little" sister, not "Litter" sister.

"Do you know what you are, young man?"

it's a joke right?
LOLOLOL!! i am sorry....It's not true.:eeyup:

"Do you where your mommy and daddy are?"

do you know where your mommy and daddy are?
:twilightsheepish:

This was a super rushed chapter where you told me everything instead of showing it.

The part where it said he died? Why is that even in there. He's obviously alive.

There was no buildup to them getting close. Just cadance yelling at her once.

You breezed through a decade of their life just to get to the incest plot beginning.

And why wouldn't twilight know what he is. Remember the mirror?

Overall a good plot bunny. But this felt more like an outline then a beginning of a story.

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it's not supposed to be an incest story. Just familial love.

Story felt like it’s done unless you want to do more?

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