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After an eventful day, Jasmine Leaf takes some time to remember.
Written for Quills and Sofas Speedwriting Lyrical contest.
At first, I was going to expand this a bit more, but then I wondered if I could make it exactly 1000 words long to fit with the name of the fic, and this is the result. Hopefully, it didn't suffer too much from it!
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Good shit. That's some good shit right there
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Thank you, means a lot coming from the author of UTLOD!
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omg THE author of UTLOD? here?
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I know! I still can't believe it myself.
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crazy stuff to see him out in the wild
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Is that who I think it is?
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applejackofalltrades? the author of UTLOD? maybe!
Very sweet and romantic too. It reminds me of when I had a girlfriend.
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Oh wow, I had no idea someone did a reading of this!
Thank you so much for showing me this!
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Yeah, thank lotus, I’m just kind of a friend who understand she’s a little shy 😅
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Does she have a FiMfic account? I'd love to thank her personally.
I never expected to click onto a story about letters being written between two ponies and immediately begin crying as I started to read. I thought it'd be a short, sappy, rather compact story that the biggest criticism I'd have would be wanting more, but that's not at all what I got.
What I got was love melted down into its purest form, and forged precisely into a thousand words of tender calligraphy. I've loved a lot in my life, and I've written love letters and poetry, but it's as though you plucked the exact emotions from my mind that make up love, formed them into strings, and played the sweetest melody with them.
I cried when I read this because it was so genuine. Writing like this, about love like this, cannot be counterfeited, it has to be authentic and that's what you've delivered with blindingly bright polish. I cried because I could relate to how Biscuit felt along the entire piece, and I cried because I could understand Jasmine. I could almost feel myself being swaddled by Biscuit's words, and being warmed by them the same way I could feel the world getting colder without her. How tea and biscuits would never be the same, how the bed would feel empty, and how life itself would be irrevocably changed now that the other half of it is gone. And I had all these feelings provoked within me because of how flawlessly and genuinely you captured the emotions. Unbelievably impressive work, Silver!
Goodness, are you looking to make me cry?
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, I put a little bit of myself in every story and I guess it shows, haha. Thank you so much for the comment, it means a lot to me ♥
This was really nice and sweet. It's sad that they had to be split like that, but at least they had a long time together.
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Thank you! I had this idea from a song and it spawned into this. Things may go, but it's always about the memories you make. I guess You and I will always be back then, if you know what I mean.