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Dang you've been putting out a huge number of fics recently. Is this a backlog or have you just been struck by inspiration?
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Well i for one am very pleased to see it. Your oral stuff, the only porny thing i care about, is some of the best on the site.
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Thank you
very nice.
Would love to see someone get knocked up from this
Love that you're giving attention to the stallions as well~
Quite good. I can't wait to se hwo else Zecora breeds
Very nice.
She could take Chrysalis down easily.
What else will happen?
What is your commission rate?
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At this point in time, $20 per 1,000 words
very nice chapter.
Extrañaba esta historia.
Question where did you found the new photo of Zecora?
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I had it commissioned. Now to find it, Go to Furaffinity and the image number is 48257735.
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Ah thank you I was confused about FA but now I do.
Very hot chapter~!
well, hope zecora can fix this
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If she does that would be some ridiculous plot armor, it is time for zecora to get bent over
wow Pinkie Pie is a villain now. I think with this twist you just gave M. Night Shyamalan a run for his money. Well done
So, Pinkie has been playing Zecora from the start. Zecora thought she was in control of everything, that she was the boss, the master, but she was just a pawn in Pinkie's game to obtain ultimate power.
Because of how Zecora was before. Pinkie knew she was perfect tool for her plans. Building up Zecora's confidence and getting her drunk on power and control. With every pony Zecora fucks the more her lust for power grows and when she started to take more power and control from the mayor and the richest. It was on a matter of time before she sought even greater power.
Of course getting Twilight and her friends was the next big step. Because controlling Twilight was needed to get Cadance and Flurry.
Because Pinkie is so close to Flurry. Its no doubt that she already knew that Cadance had transferred the power of love to her. Twilight clearly didn't know, thus Zecora wouldn't neither.
Everything was building up to this moment. It was all going exactly as Pinkie planned.
By submitting to Zecora and becoming her second in command. She had already won. Zecora played her role as the puppet flawlessly and gave the party girl everything she needed to take control of everything.
She gave Pinkie her own cock, she gave her power and control over others, and without even realizing it, she gave her the power to rule over everything.
Poor Zecora, your lust and lust for power became your ultimate downfall. All this time you thought you were the one running things. When the true mastermind, was Pinkie Pie the whole time.
You were nothing but a puppet and now you are going to become her slave.
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I was so worried as I wrote this that the twist would be revealed or hinted at too soon.
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If there was a hint. I didn't notice it.
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Your welcome and i truly mean that
Esto si fue un giro inesperado para la historia.
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gracias
Fuck wss punching I think you met her fucking was punching
Very nice ending. Very nice.
Hope to see more soon
Bueno ya terminó la historia y en mi opinión personal, le doy un 7/10
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Gracias, espero que hayas disfrutado leyéndolo.
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can i make a request futa on mare version of this story please
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Message me and we can speak more about this, though I cannot commission any stories that are modifications of existing commissions. But I am more than happy to take commissions of a similar plot.
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do you charge for commissions?
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and what tags are or are not aloud?
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$20 per 1,000 words
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Nothing is off the table, provided it is nsfw, as that is my specialty.
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i am sorry i can't afford it thanks anyway
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No problem, have a lovely day
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you too
Zecora only rhyming sometimes? Completely unreadable!
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Rhyming is hard
Damn… I really wasn’t expecting it to get this dark.
(And at this point, Pinke’s starting to sound more like an SCP entity than the Pinkie I know.)
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Yep, it's refreshing to have deranged, evil Pinkie.
You know … this last chapter is definitely the best. I kind of wish more of the story took place in this casual sex Equestria. Definitely enough material here for several chapters if it was more (heh) fleshed out.
Overall, I’m particularly impressed that you remembered futa mares have pussies. Far too many authors forget that and basically treat them as guys with tits. But the futa mares in this story still get fucked and even knocked up sometimes, and that’s wonderful!
My only complaint would be that it seems every single mare in this whole world has the same body type: bimbo. I guess that makes sense after Pinkie’s transformation, but still. Come on — if this world can have twink stallions, then why not a few “twink” mares as well? Even when there’s a mare who maybe doesn’t fit the bimbo mold — like Rainbow — the story seems to deliberately avoid doing anything with her or describing her. Come on — give us some petite mares, too! Or maybe even some chubby ones or big muscular ones! Variety is the spice of life!
Oh wait… I lied. Second complaint: More could have been done with clothing. There was some in the early chapters, such as describing Pinkie’s usual slutty attire, but then less and less as the story goes on. A lot of sexy buildup can be done with what characters are wearing and how they take it off. But something I’ve noticed in a lot of your stories is that this gets glossed over … at best. And that clothing is treated like an inconvenience to be disposed of as quickly as possible, rather than utilizing it to make things sexier.
(If you’re feeling like a challenge to expand your talents, I’d dare you to write a story featuring a petite “twink” mare that prominently features clothing and the extended process of taking it off during a long foreplay.)
Anyway, though, I don’t want to complain too much! This is kind of your style, after all. And this story delivered tons of raunchy futa action! I enjoyed it immensely! If it turns out that all you ever want to do is more of the same … then I’ll still enjoy it!
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Challenge...Considered
But what do you mean by twink mare?
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Probably easier to explain it in pictures (not easy to find Fimfic SFW examples!)
https://derpibooru.org/images/1788231
https://derpibooru.org/images/1735861
https://derpibooru.org/images/2546067
https://derpibooru.org/images/884643
https://derpibooru.org/images/1794366
https://derpibooru.org/images/1539976
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Thank you, I'll see what I can do.