Very nice ending. Very nice.

Hope to see more soon

Bueno ya terminó la historia y en mi opinión personal, le doy un 7/10

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Gracias, espero que hayas disfrutado leyéndolo.

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can i make a request futa on mare version of this story please

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Message me and we can speak more about this, though I cannot commission any stories that are modifications of existing commissions. But I am more than happy to take commissions of a similar plot.

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do you charge for commissions?

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and what tags are or are not aloud?

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$20 per 1,000 words

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Nothing is off the table, provided it is nsfw, as that is my specialty.

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i am sorry i can't afford it thanks anyway

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No problem, have a lovely day

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you too

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Rhyming is hard

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Yep, it's refreshing to have deranged, evil Pinkie.

You know … this last chapter is definitely the best. I kind of wish more of the story took place in this casual sex Equestria. Definitely enough material here for several chapters if it was more (heh) fleshed out.

Overall, I’m particularly impressed that you remembered futa mares have pussies. Far too many authors forget that and basically treat them as guys with tits. But the futa mares in this story still get fucked and even knocked up sometimes, and that’s wonderful!

My only complaint would be that it seems every single mare in this whole world has the same body type: bimbo. I guess that makes sense after Pinkie’s transformation, but still. Come on — if this world can have twink stallions, then why not a few “twink” mares as well? Even when there’s a mare who maybe doesn’t fit the bimbo mold — like Rainbow — the story seems to deliberately avoid doing anything with her or describing her. Come on — give us some petite mares, too! Or maybe even some chubby ones or big muscular ones! Variety is the spice of life!

Oh wait… I lied. Second complaint: More could have been done with clothing. There was some in the early chapters, such as describing Pinkie’s usual slutty attire, but then less and less as the story goes on. A lot of sexy buildup can be done with what characters are wearing and how they take it off. But something I’ve noticed in a lot of your stories is that this gets glossed over … at best. And that clothing is treated like an inconvenience to be disposed of as quickly as possible, rather than utilizing it to make things sexier.

(If you’re feeling like a challenge to expand your talents, I’d dare you to write a story featuring a petite “twink” mare that prominently features clothing and the extended process of taking it off during a long foreplay.)

Anyway, though, I don’t want to complain too much! This is kind of your style, after all. And this story delivered tons of raunchy futa action! I enjoyed it immensely! If it turns out that all you ever want to do is more of the same … then I’ll still enjoy it!

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Challenge...Considered

But what do you mean by twink mare?

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Probably easier to explain it in pictures (not easy to find Fimfic SFW examples!)
https://derpibooru.org/images/1788231
https://derpibooru.org/images/1735861
https://derpibooru.org/images/2546067
https://derpibooru.org/images/884643
https://derpibooru.org/images/1794366
https://derpibooru.org/images/1539976

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Thank you, I'll see what I can do.