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I really liked these latest chapters, there is so much character and plot development going on, it almost hurts me in the feels. However, I do have a point or two of contention:
The fact that the element of Generosity was never given a name made the whole "turning back into Lily" scene a little bit confusing
Most of the elements not being given names made following them a bit of a challenge and made the transition into "they are asleep" a little confusing.
Giving Chrysalis the power of death a few chapters ago sorta eliminated the whole "Chrysalis' real name" subplot, which I myself was looking forward to a little.
Noth's position on Rainbow being dormant was almost expected, but was never given, then again, I don't know if you plan to resolve this in a later chapter or not.
Other than those things, I am overall glad that this series made a return, keep up the good work.
So much feels in this one :( I liked it.
After the ending are you going to continue with Lily, Twillight etc in some small minor stories that are mainly clop? I used to love those.
Edit: You got me depressed, nice XD. That means you wrote it well.
*eyes turn white*i see a great and epic end*eyes turn normel*..........................great chapter
Dont forget, if you have a good Backup, Restore setup, when hit with a trojan and virus, its usually quicker to just nuke the drive and copy everything back, even if you have to use a time link to the nuked partition at a pre infected point in the past. 8}
I really hope things work, I intensely dislike such petty minded deities. I mean, restricting yourself to one mediocre backward out the way mudball, in a system that usually contains at least a million times the resources? Sigh.
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I have got the strangest fans.
Commence read.
That brought them out of their shells.