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Oh my I finish catching up to the last chapter right as you post a new one. So many intriguing factors here: some possible foreshadowing with Celestia and Luna, a brutal display of Chrysalis' power as well as the revelation that she's been clever enough to hide behind a false name this whole time.
Loved the portrayal of Death and the ultimatum of balance he has given. It will surely make for entertaining future chapters.
And a tip of the hat to you for the backround on Faith, did not see that coming at all.
Well, commence read.
Melody has gained access to the death note for 5 names :P
I...... I honestly don't know what to say. An entire city........ completely leveled. Just wow.
EDIT:
I just now thought of something- wouldn't Lily still know the names of many of the old changeling liutenants? That would certainly be somewhere to start for choosing the five.
Shit is getting cruel
When are they going to give lily her goddess stuff? She's the element of generosity right?
...hm. I'm back for the first time in a while and all this happens. I'm sad that Connor's dead, but I'm kinda glad Faith left 'cause I didn't like her. At all. And no, it's not because of the shipping (I don't really care anymore what happens with Melody), but I just felt like it was another random character getting forced into the story so she can screw around with Melody.
But yeah. Death is now my favorite god in this story. Pretty badass for a six-year-old.
HIATUS?! I'm gonna cry now.
What does it mean for it to b on hiatus?
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It means I'm currently not working on it. Likely, I won't be for a while.
That sucks, this getting to be a VERY good story, clop excluded
Derp I was wondering why this took so fricking long to update, you had only done 1 chapter so far. Today I found you actually were updating this the whole time but I forgot to favorite it after I read chapter 1 at the 25th of september. I feel so stupid right now.
2030431 Finished, only took me 2 weeks and 4 hours
I just got halfway nearly half-way through, and I have to say, "THIS IS UTTERLY MAGNIFICENT!"
The imagery and vivid description of coloring is amazing, never have I read anything, professional or otherwise, that emphasized the scenery, colors and EVERYTHING, while keeping the story intact, let alone as... glorious(the only word I can think of) as the one this tale sports. Most of the time, if the names weren't from the MLP:FIM, I would think this is a completely stand-alone story, with no ties to the show.
In short, this is amazing in both story, imagery, and everything else it brings in to the fray. Thank you so much!
This is an excellent story. I have read ADKoL, ASKoL:LC and ADKoL:MT in about a week and a half and I really hope you finish it. I know you have other stories that you're working on, but I really hope you finish this one at some point. Very well done and I really want to read more.