I really don't like this chapter, mostly for our main character getting his ass kicked like a b****!

Sorry, it's just that he could at least defend himself by using his Werewolf Powers, or even knock out Luna or something??!! I WON'T go out like that without a fight?

No offense, Connorcooper.

Anyway, Drugged or not! I hope that BOTH Celestia and Luna should have HUGE extreme guilt and regrets, and wants to make some very huge apologizes and favours to Jack.

Plus, maybe they can FINALLY focus on taking care of those frickin noble bastards that hates our main character for very retarded reasons like Racism/Xenophobia!!!!!

Seriously, drugging and messing with the Princesses feelings and ALMOST killing their own possible lover ( Wolf Jack ) is obviously a f****** DEATH SENTENCE to whoever did this to them to get to Jack!!!

No more Mrs. "Nice/Pacifist" Princess!!!!!

Can any of you agree with me?!

As for your little joke about the Alpha Legion at the end there? I know that they are highly mysteries, can be very confusing on their true loyalties, and their two Primarch's making their own "guessing game" on who's who with each other ( That lasts WAY too long to be not funny anymore. Plus, I doubt that Tzeentch or even GW finally can give us a honest and clear answer about that?! ). 😒 🙄

Anyway, even IF they were included/involved with this story. I highly doubt they like to do something like this crappy "assassin" plot?! I thought they can do it personally themselves, or are even be secretly Jack's and the Ponies powerful allies?

Have to admit wished Jack tried to better defend himself from Luna but still good all in all dont get me wrong. Well this thickens the plot with someone messing with the princess sisters here with them being drudged, thou the two better make it up to Jack in a HUGE way and in more then one occasion. Wonder if tehy know about this info. And yeah he deserves to know that someone tried to had him killed there. Wouldn't surprise me is either Bloublood and/or Neighsay was involved in this in one way or another

Ok that was sweet and heartwarming with Jack and Flurry and hope we get more of those later on. Wonder if someone is stupid enough to threaten her life and risk Jack's unholy wrath later on. Dont get me wrong Im sure Flurry's parents, aunt and grandparents will kill anyone who would do that but Jack is a werewolf, aka a apex predator thus a far more fearsome and deadly killer then said family members if he has a good reason to go berserk

Great work keep it up

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Im with you there and I got torches and pitchforks if you want to go classic but got other stuff if needed

*reads it, and my eyes goes crosseyes* you may want to check the chapter. there is alot of unneeded words in it.

He then turned to see Luna flying straight towards him as his fur when white from fear (not really of course) as she zoomed forward.

Beastars?

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I think legosi cut his blue fur