T.
This may seem a bit sudden, but I need you to come to Ponyville, if you can.
As I already wrote before, a few weeks ago, Celestia sent me a book with a special kind of spell in it, which I needed to study. Now, I can't tell you more about it in this letter, considering how sensitive it is, but if you're interested, I could really use your help on this.
I realise you have your travelling show to manage, and how egoistical it may seem for me to ask you to come all the way to ponyville, but you're the only pony I could think of to ask for this.
Like, I could really really use your help.
Signed,
T.
Written for the Swapped Roles' Reunions contest.
Chapters (3)
This is marked as complete? But there's so much potential for more?
This is such a fun concept! It's a little rough to read, though--lots of typos and other errors. Do you have an editor?
Nevertheless, it's a great little world you have here, and I'd love to see more of it!
I have read many alternated universes in Fim fiction where Trixie is the element of magic. But with Twilight and Trixie are role reversed is a concept I have read about yet. If Trixie also become an Alicorn then call me intrigued indeed to see where you will take this story and world building.
Though there are a few elephants that need to be addressed, namely Trixie herself. The cannon Trixie is of a bit a narcissist hence the boasting, however the show has shown there more to her then that. So perhaps a background story about how Celestia teaching was able to guide Trixie to get rid of those two flaws?
Anyway it's a really good concept and I do hope you will make an attempt to build more of this alternate universe.
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This was inspired and written specifically for the contest, which required entries to be complete, so I wanted to keep it short and self-contained,
and I almost ran out of time just finishing these three chapters, but let's not mention that.10883538
I don't, no. Mostly because I, uh, spend a lot more time editing/proofreading stories for other people, and I finished this so closely to the deadline/needing to go to sleep I didn't do a reread to catch those before publishing. It should be better now though, I hope.
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This story was largerly written on my (fanon) idea that, in canon, Trixie became a narcissist precisely because she needed to do so much boasting for her show, not the other way around. So if she never did shows, needed to boast for those shows, how would she turn out? I actually planned to add in a whole section about Trixie and Twi talking about what would have happened if they switched places (meta-humor ahoy), but, uh, yeah, deadlines exist, so that got cut out.
As for a continuation, I do want to write some more on this, but, well, look at my other stories and you'll see how that usually turns out, unfortunately. Anything's possible, but I can't make a promise on this.
I really liked this alternative universe.
Love to read more.