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With such long chapters I'm not surprised it took longer to write. Thanks to the author for sticking with it!
Action 1:
Search Saddle Row Theatre: Hopefully I'm right about this, but I assume Rarity would want to make an example of Starlight in front of a crowd
Action 2:
return to the crystal empire
Character
Bring Coco along: I have a feeling we'll need her help getting through to Rarity, as we did Marble Pie for Pinkie
Oof, Rumble didn't last long, only having 2 Purity is a real problem, especially if you don't have Reformation Gems to fall back on. I'm not sure I like characters being able to lose more than 1 Purity a chapter, things can hit at once like here (and I think with Sweetie as well) that mean they can get knocked out without any chance for the readers to react. Though this group is more fanservice than the main party, so having this show how dangerous Equestria is if you aren't in a party led by an alicorn and a master mage isn't bad. It was a fun chapter to read too.
Action 1:
Search Saddle Row Theatre
Previously I assumed Rarity might have set up in the statue due to her ego, but Horse makes a good point about needing an audience for Starlight. Normally I'd be against metagaming out of character knowledge but the party needs all the help it can get.
Action 2:
Head for Twilight Sparkle's Castle
Lot of bad options here, I'm thinking Rumble and Dinky were doomed from the start. But it's a fun doom to read. Even fallen, Rumble knows they were heading to the Doo home and may know enough to lead Voyette (awesome name btw) there to find her, so no staying to rest. Dinky isn't dumb or hopeless enough to try the last ditch attempt to snap Rumble out of the corruption by talking to him, even if that end to the group may be entertaining to read, it's the end. Since Twilights castle was cleared out by the main party it might be safe and could have uncorrupted ponies there, or it could have just been taken over again when they left. But it's not as bad as giving up and returning to the Empire, but if her next step goes bad and she's still able it might be time to go back with her tail between her legs while she still can force her tail down.
Character:
Bring Coco along
While I don't think Coco has as much pull with Rarity as Marble had with Pinkie, it can't hurt to try. Even if it just means Rarity hesitates for a moment to give Flurry an opening.
Search Saddle Row Theatre
Stay put and rest *
Bring Coco along
*=changed vote
Action 1:
Search Saddle Row Theatre
Action 2:
Search for Rumble
Send Coco back to the Crystal Empire
Action 1- Search the mare of liberty statue
Action 2- Return to the Crystal Empire
Character- Bring Coco along
Action 1- Search the mare of liberty statue
Action 2- Return to the Crystal Empire
Action 3: bring Coco along. There may be a way for her to break Rarity out of the corruption.
Tbh I gave up on this book because it's always bad end.
Action 1 - Changed my Mind, lets go to the Theatre. Rarity MAYBE will be distracted by her narcissistic preparations for her (certainly, lol) award winning performance, called "Dicked Down Starlight". This will be the best shot to either luckily convert Rarity, or defeat her with juggernaut that is Flurry.
Action 2 - Lets search for Rumble. I was kicking and screaming when he turned into a cum squirting mess. I hope that Dinky can find him and turn him back to at least 1/2 purity points with some pep talk and stuff. I don't care if Rumble will 100% be a bait >:( And besides, leaving him behind to continue Dinky's quest or just escaping back to the Empire like a little b*tch would be unhonorable and morally wrong, and Dinky is a good girl.
Lets bring Coco along, we need ANYONE to talk reason into Rarity, and she is the only option; /
Action 1:
Search the Mare of Liberty Statue
Action 2:
Return to the Crystal Empire
Character:
Bring Coco along
Search the theater - Rarity would want to be the center of attention.
Return to the Crystal Empire - She fumbled this bad. Far worse than Flurry did. I want Sparkler to tear her a new one for being stupid.
Bring Coco - If Marble was able to get to Pinkie. Then, Coco has the best shot of getting to Rarity.
Action 1:
Search the Saddle Row Theatre: Knowing Rarity, Making a Show out of Starlight Is what she is more likely to do
Action 2:
Head to Twilight Sparkle Castle: This was Hard because on one Hand,by herself and the corruption literaly slowing her down, There is little she can do as of Now, but on the Other And slimply Giving Up Feels...Wrong,there little to no chance that she will ever be considered to Assist Flurry if she goes Back,so regardless we are still Losing Dinky. so even if its A Gamble I still want to Believe Dinky has A chance and if that ends on her Fall too then I Accept it. Better go Fighting than Backing Down.
Character:
Bring Coco along: If the Previous Two Times Had show anything is that Is VITAL to have a Close Friend or Relative of the Mane 6 in Order to Snap them Back to Reality,so she must tag Along.
Action 1:
Search Saddle Row Theatre
Action 2:
Return to the Crystal Empire
Character:
Bring Coco along
Action 1:
Search the Mare of Liberty Statue
Action 2:
Head for Twilight Sparkle's Castle
Char:
Send Coco back to the Crystal Empire
AWESOME WORK 👏👏
Definitely the best chapters and it was worth the hiatus and well press your F for Bonbon and Rumble please :(
My options:
1-Search the Mare of Liberty Statue: It's a bit weird to think that Rarity would make a show to show the fall of Starlight in my opinion, but I liked the idea of going to the statue to see what's there.
2-Stay put and rest: Maybe we can extend Dinky's stay a bit if he gets his strength back.
3-Send Coco back to the Crystal Empire: If Rarity didn't give a damn about Sweetie Belle, I can't imagine with coco.
Action 1:
Search the Mare of Liberty Statue
Action 2:
Stay put and rest
Character:
Bring Coco along
Wow, Rumble going down like Yamcha.
Okay, here my vote.
1. Saddle Row Theatre.
If an invader got captured, they will face public execution. or in this case public rape! Starlight will be there.
2. Search for Rumble (edit)
Dinky joins the game voluntarily, she must play until game ended.
Bring Coco along.
Because why not? extra hand is useful. maybe she can help convince Rarity. maybe she know the way. or maybe is another Yamcha. there is no reason to not bring her along.
BTW i really want to know what twilight gonna do now that she lost everything.
*Find the Statue of Liberty Mare: Honestly, I would like a bad ending, just out of curiosity, after all, there is no danger in this fic.
*Search for Rumble: Well, how it takes someone else for someone corrupted to break free (Maud with Pinkie, for example) is a pattern I notice and while I don't like it that way, I want to see Rumble again, maybe. Dinky can talk some sense into him.
*Sends Coco back to the Crystal Empire: I don't know, like I said I put up with Pinkie and AJ's reformation twice, and it will sound very repetitive if coco says a few words and Rarity magically goes back to normal, I don't know. it would be too repetitive for me (no offense) too, Flurry has two elements of harmony, maybe he can do something with that.
Mare of Liberty Statue
Stay put and rest
Send Coco back to the Crystal Empire
Will there be a "MeanWhile" episode? we still don't know Twilight's whereabouts.
This is exciting! :D
Action 1:Search Saddle Row Theatre
Action 2:Return to the Crystal Empire
Character:Bring Coco along
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Maybe makes her easier to win over - good too, because it looks like the party might need a win.
*Mare of Liberty Statue
*Search Rumble(Change Vote)
*Send Coco back to the Crystal Empire
Great work :)
Action 1:
Search Saddle Row Theatre
Action 2:
Stay And Rest
Character:
Bring Coco along
Saddle row might have answers, though I'm PRETTY sure Rarity is in the Statue, making it into a magical dream weaver beacon or something.
Dinky might be able to save Rumble and maybe get back home? But only if she can get some rest, recover, and try another long distance teleport once they can save him.
Coco might be needed to help, or she'll get saved and then immediately re-broken and it'll be fun either way.
A1: Search the Mare of Liberty Statue
A2: Stay and rest
Ch: Send Coco back to the Crystal Empire
I just want a chapter just with flurry, to see how he gets out of this situation.
Action 1:Search Saddle Row Theatre
Action 2: Search for Rumble
Character: Bring Coco along
I don't have much hope for Dinky, so I'm choosing the option that seems to give her the sexiest end.
Action 1: Search the Mare of Liberty Statue( Change the vote)
Action 2: Search for Rumble
Character: Send Coco back to the Crystal Empire
1-Search Saddle Row Theatre
2-Stay put and rest
3-Send Coco back to the Crystal Empire
I feel that we are in the final stretch, keep it up.
Will there be separate projects like the fic of the cadence?
A1:
- Statue
A2:
-Stay put and rest
A3:
-Coco send to Crystal empire
It is good to see you back and do not abandon your project, it is clear that you are committed.
Action 1 and 2:
Character:
Coco back to the Crystal Empire
Mare of Liberty Statue, Search for Rumble and Send Coco back to the Crystal Empire
One thing I'll suggest is to still have the characters stats there with 0 Purity, just so we can see our characters one last time before they go.
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Will do. I've also just edited the previous chapters for their fallen characters.
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Nope, just thought that up myself.
Action 1:
Search Saddle Row Theatre
Action 2:
Search for Rumble
Character:
Send coco to crystal empire.
Search Saddle Row Theatre for Cozy, Stay put and rest for Flurry and Coco back to the Crystal Empire
CTRL C + V
Action 1:Search the Mare of Liberty Statue
Action 2:Search for Rumble
Character:Coco back to the Crystal Empire
something that I had not realized, are the labels, because every time a character falls, the author changes them xd.
A1: Search Saddle Row Theatre
A2: return to the crystal empire
Char: Coco back crystal empire
Action 1:
Search the Mare of Liberty Statue
Action 2:
Head for Twilight Sparkle's Castle
Character:
Bring Coco along
Coco send to Crystal empire
Search Rumble
Mare Statue