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Nice! Extra long chapter; worth the wait.
Don't burn yourself out though: no need to write longer chapters just because it took longer to get around to. Now that I've written my first fic, perhaps we could collab to share some of the workload, or to write a fun side project if you want a break from this one. j
Got it: will change the original comment when changing votes.
Action 1: Travel through the tunnels and the night
Action 2: Walk to Ponyville
Character: Allow Zap to remain a harpy for now
Gems: No
Get above ground
Fly to Ponyville
Keep Zap a harpy
Yes (FH:1, BB:2, VS:1)
I really like how you write Zap, she is daughter of rainbow dash after all.
Ok time for voting!
Action 1: Travel through the tunnels and the night.
Action 2: Fly to Ponyville.
Character: Allow Zap to remain a harpy for now. She's cool! this will be very useful and good for story too.
Gem: YES! Starlight 1, Bon Bon 2, Vinyl 1 , Flurry 1 or more, just give her some gem! get rid of her Speed Penalty so she can fight again. like come, she have been noting but burden for three chapter!
Action 1- get above ground
Action 2- teleport to ponyville
Character- change her back to a pegasus
Gems- No
PS my friend what happened to Spike l completely forgot about him.
Find a tunnel part of the tunnel to hide in. Fatigue is the enemy.
Teleport to ponyville negates the chance of a enemy encounter.
Sorry Zap you get to be a harpy for a while. Gotta conserve GEMS
Yes Vynil need gems badly. What ever it takes to get her mobile again. Flurry needs a couple so she can be back at fighting trim.
Lot of action this chapter, and Mr Cake was found! So the Cake family is reunited. And those jealous of their reunion are already out of contact, which may not be for the best as Rarity is already taking an interest. Will the party clear the way for the unknowing rogue pair, or will Rumble and Dinky fall headfirst into corruption?
Find another part of the tunnels to hide in
Suhpyt was a surprise encounter, a Nurgle-y beastman with mutagenetic slime? Out of left field, but the underdark in D&D is always pretty wild, so the lewd MLP version likely follows. And a Prince Noiratrom? Sounds like the way isn't as clear as Pinkie implied, somebody has moved in and set up a kingdom down here. I get the sense this guy didn't tell anyone about the magic he detected (likely to be able to take credit for the capture) so resting down here should still be safe, but maybe not traveling the rest of the way.
Walk to Ponyville
Teleporting is too much of a gamble with so many of the team out of it. Flying could also bring the attention of another enemy, a walk under cover of trees into Ponyville and slipping into an abandoned home is probably the way to go.
Allow Zap to remain a harpy for now
While dick tentacles were an absurd dope-slap of lewds, Zap turning harpy feels like it is narratively fitting. The corruption even has benefits, like more speed, and double the wing cuddles (and wing gropes with that -1 Will) for Flurry. I'd say leave it in place, I'm not even opposed to it being permanent. Though I guess we'll see how everyone reacts next chapter.
Gems: 2 for Bonbon, 1 for Flurry, Bonbon's Incubated corruptions are going to take 2 Purity next chapter, meaning she has to be at 3 to keep her mind intact. This is how we lost Sweetie at the start. This'll also mess up Flurry, but she should only lose 1 Purity next chapter and should be able to take Gems after unless she loses more Purity before the birth. But she is the main character, lets play it safe and try to keep her at max Purity.
Action 1:
Travel through the tunnels at night and
Action 2:
Fly to Ponyville
Character:
Allow Zap to remain a harpy for now
Gems:
No
Find another part of the Tunnel to hide in.
Walk to ponyville
Allow Zap to remain a Harpy for now.
Yes(FH:1,BB:2,VS:1)
I Strongly Believe that if there is a moment to use gems it would be now. Hoarding them Is Starting to affect the party negatively since About a few chapters the party doesn’t stop getting on the Ropes because the Corruption won’t stop being a Pest
C’mon guys,let the gems flow
Action 1:
Travel through the tunnels and the night
Action 2:
Teleport to Ponyville
Character:
Allow Zap to remain a harpy for now
Gems:
Yes on Bonbon and use 1 gem
Hide in another tunnel. The party can't do anything right now.
Let zap stay in her harpy form. There don't seem to be any drawbacks right now. And, good god, does the team need a power-up right now.
Teleport to Ponyvile. Between Vinyl, Flurry, and Starlight. Teleporting should be more accessible.
Give two gems to Flurry. Two gems to Bonbon. One rock to Vinyl. Flurry's idea to let the corruption build up until she needs a gemstone is stupid. Since a gem removes one set of deterioration, if they have an affliction that hinders speed before two more, then the party is screwed. They need to be more careful with their choices. Or we need to be more cautious. 😋
Action 1:
Travel through the tunnels and the night
Action 2:
Teleport to Ponyville
Character:
Allow Zap to remain a harpy for now
Gems:
No
This Suhpyt was some sexy Dark Souls shit, noice. Bon bon is just one step before turning into sex crazed bimbo, and Dinky was getting pestered by Nightmare Rarity, and by some miracle, she didn't got corrupted. Also, Flurry will have 1 purity point next chapter if not given reformation gems ; /
By the way, I wonder how certain corruptions will look on stallions, like instead of bigger breasts, they will get larger testicles (as we have seen), or just humongous bara tiddies, or maybe both 😏
Great chapter, as always.
Action 1
Lets travel through the tunnels and the night, we need to make haste to Manehattan. I hope there still will be some resistance against corruption and debauchery. Hiding is a no, because it will waste time, and going above ground is also a nope, because we will 100% encounter sometihing. Tunnels are prop safe after team defeated Suhpyt.
Action 2
I choose teleportation, because Dinky seem to have luck, and also item giving her advantage, in teleportations. Flying is a no, because someone will be carried here ; / Just walking is too risky, I do not want for team to have a close encounter with rape spider of Midnight Sparkle.
Character
Let Zap remain a monster girl, it turned her into a practically Sonic at the very low cost.
Gems
One for Flurry, and two for Bon bon, also one for Vinyl. It's too risky for Flurry to have only 1 purity point next chapter, and Bon bon is THIS close to breaking. I want to see her rescuing Lyra :c Ok, after some thought, Vinyl WILL succumb to any temptations with this -4 to the will checks, with this her corruption may snowball ; /
Action 1:
Travel through the tunnels and the night
Action 2:
Fly to Ponyville
Change her back to a pegasus
Gems:
No.
Action 1:
Travel through the tunnels and the night
Action 2:
Question: I thought we were going to Manehattan next; why are we going to Ponyville? Is it in the same direction? I think so based on the map, but just making sure.
If so, walk to Ponyville
Character:
Allow Zap to remain a harpy for now
I assume we can change this back later if needed?
Gems:
One each on Vinyl, BonBon, Flurry and Starlight
Gotta prep for those eggs next chapter
Action 1:Get above ground
action 2:
TP(Teleport) ponyville.
Change her back to a pegasus
gems:
none.
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The second action choice is for Dinky and Rumble.
Long chapter, great and loaded with content.
I wonder if applejack can be attacked by talvira's troops or even worse get corrupted again, is this possible?
I will leave my vote:
Action 1: Travel through the tunnels and the night
Action 2: Teleport to Ponyville
Character:Change her back to a pegasus
Gems:No
Action 1:
Travel through the tunnels and the night
Action 2:
Walk to Ponyville
Character:
Allow Zap to remain a harpy for now
Gems:
Yes - Vinyl 1, Bonbon 1, Starlight 1, Flurry 1
Action 1:
Find another part of the tunnels to hide in
Action 2:
Fly to Ponyville
Character
Change her back to a pegasus
Gems:
No
Action 1
Find another part of the tunnels to hide in
Action 2
Fly to Ponyville
Character:
Allow Zap to remain a harpy for now
Gems:
Yes
One for flurry
One for bonbon
One for vinyl
The new votes are interesting, speaking of the chapter I liked it a lot, I would still like a bad ending to the previous chapter, Gummy could have shone.
1-Get above ground
2-Fly to Ponyville
Char-Change her back to a pegasus
Gems - No
Will there be a chapter in the meantime?
Action 1:Get above ground
Action 2:Teleport to Ponyville
Character:Change her back to a pegasus
Gems:No
Will there be a chapter where Flurry's clothes aren't destroyed? xd
Action 1:
Travel through the tunnels and the night
Action 2:
Teleport to Ponyville
Change her back to a pegasus
Gems:
No.
Action 1:Get above ground
Action 2:Fly to Ponyville
Character:Change her back to a pegasus
Gems:No
Action 1: Find another part of the tunnels to hide in
Action 2: Teleport to Ponyville
Allow Zap to remain a harpy for now
Yes: Two gem for bon bon and one gem for vinyl scratch
Action 1:Travel through the tunnels and the night
Action 2:Fly to Ponyville
haracter:Change her back to a pegasus
Gems:No
if rumble and dinky also have a bad ending, is the fic over? or continue normally in case it happens?
Action 1:Get above ground
-Maybe when they're up there they're in a better place.
action 2: Fly to Ponyville
-I was between teleport and fly, I bow to fly I would like to see Dinky fighting demons
Character:Change her back to a pegasus
-Well I like things to get complicated, besides I don't see the problem, it can be transformed when the situation warrants it.
Gems:No
Hey CorruptedKindness, i think some people here are using multiple account.
i notice so many user are join this site at the same month and same year. i think its very suspicious, or maybe it was just coincidence.
can you look to it? sorry, i just dont like play with cheater.
A question will there be a chapter of "Meanwhile"? I did not see the update you put on your blog.
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He's still protecting the Crystal Empire. There is the potential for him to become a party member, but we have yet to hit the trigger
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The fic will only hit a bad end if Flurry hits 0 purity points. Should Dinky and Rumble fall, it'll be sad, but the story moves on.
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I'm still working on it. Been busy at work and other stuff.
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Yeah, another thing I noticed Is that some votes are the same. and I don't just mean what they voted for but that the comments themselves are almost the same comment. so far things dont look too suspicious yet on this chapters's comment section.
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Glad that i'm not only one who notice, i know that was rude of me but i won't stand cheater if there's really is out there.
A magnificent chapter, even with the delay it was a fun ride and a rough fight!
Action 1:
Travel through the tunnels and the night
Action 2:
Teleport to Ponyville
Character:
Change her back to a pegasus
Gems:
Yes: 2 Flurry, 0 Starlight, 2 Bonbon, 3 Vinyl
Action 1:Travel through the tunnels and the night
Action 2:Fly to Ponyville
Character:Allow Zap to remain a harpy for now (I want a meeting between the creature of Talvira vs Zapp)
Gems:YES!
1 for ZAPP, please.
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I will address this in the next chapter
Action 1 : Travel through the tunnels and the night. Clearly they have been discovered, they need to move on then rest later.
Action 2 : Teleport to Ponyville. Teleporting is a big risk as well as flying, but walking takes too long and might get attacked in the meanwhile...
Character: Change Zap back to Pegasus. I don't know how we do that (probably reformation gem), it's not specified how or how many gems.
Gems: Vinyl 1, Bonbon 2, Flurry 2.
I'm losing confidence that they will ever make it through this adventure. Hopefully if we lose s9meone we get to choose a replacement. 🤷♂️
Action 1: Find another part of the tunnels to hide in
Action 2: Fly to Ponyville
Character: Allow Zap to remain a harpy for now
Gems: 2 for Bonbon only
It is a curious advance in these two chapters, it was a good idea to wait for the extra chapter to know how the panorama is, so I leave my votes:
Get above ground: Hopefully, Twilight could have teleported almost to where Flurry is or in Ponyville (there are two groups now where anyone can help them in some way) or at least Talvira's defenses won't be a problem anymore with what we've seen in this chapter, Going through the same tunnel is a danger and I don't see the other option as viable if the objective is to advance.
Fly to Ponyville: Like I said, if Twilight isn't in Flurry's group, she'll almost certainly be in Dinky's group, helping them out.
Allow Zap to remain a harpy for now: Just in case I'm wrong on the first option, Zap can be a good defensive option.
No gems at the moment.
*Get above ground
*Fly to Ponyville
*Allow Zap to remain a harpy for now
*Gems: 1 for Vynil.
I don't know if the voting period is over or if there is a period but here are mine and I bet Twilight teleported with Dinky and Rumble, it would be interesting.