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  • T Unmarked

    When a pegasus grows to adulthood without gaining his cutie mark, a particular professor offers to bring him around the world in search of his purpose.
    177,360 words · 4,380 views  ·  136  ·  4
  • E Strive

    With Appleoosa on the table, Braeburn and the townsfolk have to figure out how to pay back the investors who lent them the money to build their dream!
    16,896 words · 640 views  ·  47  ·  0
  • T Havoc's Hourglass

    Continuing the search for Havoc's locked away powers, Novell and Whisper must lead their friends on separate quests to both the wintry peaks of Dragon lands and Dromadary, the deserts of the Camels.
    12,980 words · 303 views  ·  36  ·  1
  • E Where There's a Quill...

    What happens when Twilight runs out of things to do? Write a novel, of course! But is it that easy?
    4,122 words · 794 views  ·  33  ·  1
  • E Professor Search's Logbook

    A collection of short stories based on Unmarked.
    7,835 words · 148 views  ·  11  ·  0

Blog Posts40

  • 41w, 4d
    Havoc's Hourglass Cover Art

    I just want to reiterate to my readers and followers, both new and old, that LimreiArt (Whom I'm sure most of you have heard or at least seen artwork of) is awesome, and that paul (a faithful and generous reader) is also awesome for arranging the commission in the first place.

    If you'd like the source of the cover to tell LimreiArt how awesome she is, go here:

    Make sure to comment and subscribe to her, If you haven't already, because a lot of her art is super cool.

    Also, for anyone interested in art, if you would like to create some black and white/grayscale images as "Chapter Toppers" (which would naturally be placed at the top of each chapter with your name and your DeviantArt below it), do contact me here, or at my email address (

    Finally, thank you all for reading and I hope you all enjoy what's to come! Chapter 2 should be coming this Friday, as will (hopefully) all chapters on that day every week.

    Off we go!

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  • 42w, 2d
    It's Finally Here!

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  • 55w, 4d
    In Lighter News...

    Work has officially begun on Unmarked: Havoc's Hourglass, the official name of Unmarked's sequel.

    Outlining and chapter writing started today, but I'll be waiting for my cover art to be finished (commissioned by the awesome paul) before I begin releasing chapters.

    This has an advantage of you guys not having to wait so long between chapters, though you will, of course, have to wait until I start releasing to enjoy the story at all. I've outlined up to Chapter 9.

    In regards to chapters, the overall word count of chapters will probably be a lot shorter than you're used to. I'm sure there will be longer chapters here and there, but I don't want to go over 8k per chapter if I can help it. It may end up growing, but 8k is the plan.

    Anyway, tell me what you guys think of the title, and let your friends know about Unmarked and it's new sequel.

    **I'll be including a detailed summary of Unmarked in the beginning of the sequel for those who don't want to read through the horribly boring first few chapters of Unmarked.**

    So, that's all for now.

    Off we go!

    3 comments · 68 views
  • ...

Sometimes it feels like these lazy summer days will last forever. It's calm. Peaceful. Perfect. Life will come to me eventually, but right now, I just want to stay where I am, listening to the melody of the world around me. Still, I can't shake that feeling that something's... missing.

I just don't know if I should care.

First Published
5th Sep 2012
Last Modified
10th Oct 2012
#1 · 115w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I really enjoyed this.  Current is one of the more appealing OCs I've seen lately, and the scenes seem very real.  Please tell me there's more to come.

#2 · 115w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I thought this was written rather well. The hidden theme with Current is, well, very awesome, and I won't spoil it on others who haven't found out/read it. :derpytongue2:

#3 · 115w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Summer Song - Joe Satriani

#4 · 115w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Beautifully written and I really like Current. I can't wait for more :pinkiesmile:

#5 · 115w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Yup, there will be more. Just one or two more chapters, though. It originated as a one shot that went not a little long, so I split it up!

Look forward to the next chapter soon.

#6 · 115w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I love this story. It's understated, but deeper than it appears at first glance. You really sold the characters, especially Current, and I empathize with the story's themes on a profound personal level.

Some of the sentences run too long, with a few too many adverbs here and there, but it still feels like Current is telling the story, not you, the author. That's one of the marks of good first-person storytelling. Good stuff as always, Cros.

#7 · 115w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

By God is this great!

#8 · 114w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Okay author, got your submission. Generally we don't have the time to do this, but I'll have your doc open at 8pm US Pacific time this evening.

#9 · 110w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

A thing to note: This story is something I'm working on between massive projects, so the updates will be possibly few and far between. Another thing to note is that this is literally slice of life. The plot is extant, but I'm really just going with the flow, so it will be slow. It's meant entirely to be like this, as a reflection of the character's mind and also because this is purely a relaxation story to write. So, if you like that, you're in luck! If you like adventure, danger and a swift-moving plot, this may not be the story for you. I have another story like that, though, if you're interested. Feel free to check out Unmarked.

Anyways, good night, folks and please, I hope you enjoy.

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