On the day a comet passes overhead, Princess Twilight Sparkle decides to keep the sky dark, allowing all of Equestria to enjoy the view.
It's weird-- but a good weird! Definitely good.
Some other things are weird, too. But they might also be a good weird.
Check out the sequel, Light Show!
First place in a Quills and Sofas speedwriting contest with the theme "heartwarming" and the prompt "light up the sky". Originally written in 75 minutes, this version has seen some editing and adjustment. Special thanks to Red Parade, Emotion Nexus, and Aurora Dawn for pre-reading during the contest!
This story currently stands alone, but I may add more stories about what happened on Comet Day at a later date!
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This fails in one regard. This should've been from Twilight's POV first, then from whatever static noise background pony this chapter uses.
Probably wouldn't have worked for wha it's written for. But that's me.
I do love the story. Just ignoring the flaming pile of horseapples ship you used.
That last line hit perfectly.
This was cute. Now I want want make a ship with these two
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i'm pretty sure that one is basically canon by now O.o
Aww that was sweet.
10770648 Well, I meant make a story around these two but that was my bad for not explaining it better
Always a sucker for some good OctaScratch. And this is good.
Only issue I had was with the word "comet". IRL, comets don't really streak across the sky like that. It's not even a big issue, since I know that Equestria's sky is very different from our own. I guess it just threw me off a little.
Interesting story. I was just starting to work on my own comet. Nice job, Mushroom.
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I kind of find it incredible how many times I’ve come across a post by you where you criticize the pairing. Have to ask, if you don’t like the ship why bother watching it sail?
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How's Clown College treating you?
Absolutely gorgeous.
Hello! Have a review. A cute little fic with a really sweet ending. Nice dialogue, too. Liked!
Came for the comet, stayed for the slice of life & romance. Well-written!