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mushroompone


This is great. I’m going to get a good grade in horsefic, something that is both normal to want and possible to achieve,

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A couple of ponies find themselves on a Buckball pitch late at night. How they got there isn't important; the important thing is that they're there, and the air is cool, and the cicadas are singing, and the sky is a brand-new color.


Second place in a Quills and Sofas speedwriting contest. Originally written in 70 minutes, this version has been expanded quite a bit! Hope you all enjoy it

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“I think…” he said, slowly and carefully, letting the words roll over his tongue. “I think to truly love something, you have to love all of it. Win, lose, or draw. Past, present, or future. Highs and lows and inbetween.”

Incredibly important this. You don't get to pick and choose, not if you want it to be real, not if you're going to commit.

This story really is underrated. It's a thought-provoking, inspiring work of fiction. Incorporating different ponies' thorough, elaborate stories into a larger, concise, and cohesive concept can be difficult, but you did it quite well. There truly is something indescribable about a summer night, and you captured that it four different ways. Nice work. :)

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Thank you so much!! It's hard to sell stories like this, so it's exciting when people find it and actually "get it". I'm glad this gave you a little taste of summer at the end of autumn :twilightsmile:

They like it 'cause it's straight culture. Even for horses.

Heckin' neigh-sayer spawn.

I'm trying to think of what the gender-neutral variant of Chad is, 'cause you're clearly one. This pacing is going down smoother than if I drank a gallon of horse laxatives. Your sense of flow is just so nice and the little sprinkles of romance are just a delight. Surprise RariTwi is fun!

In the end, this was a purely poggers read. It's fluff like this that really stands out.

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