I have the feeling that Moon Glow is going to go crazy and rape Luna, but that's just me.

Promising.

1219471 Given the fact that there is a mature setting there, it's likely.

Will have to read this later. Currently reading Past Sins. Just started Ch. 12. But this sounds enticing, so will definately have to read later.

I'll read it soon!
just not know.
I have not been on the internet all day, and I want to get some stuff done.
But when I do read it, you sure as hell better hope I like it!!!

Wonder if sun shine has a crush on celestia... Hmmm.

1219471 oh god that made me laugh just picturing it

1219511 Have you disliked any of my work yet?

1219520
Yes
Bam!

1219526 which ones???

The interest has me.

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Well!
I lied!
There is stuff of yours that I don't want to read, but I can't say I don't like it because I did not read it!

Just like a dead body!
you can't say you don't like them if you never had sex with one.

But yea, there is a lot I won't read because it does not fit my taste.

I don't wish to be rude, but I just noticed that this had been added to the All-OC stories group, when it probably shouldn't.

For reference, a week or so ago a Luna/Guard clopfic was removed from the group because it didn't fit the group description, i.e. it had a canon character as one of the leading players.

1219579well that's dumb as shit!

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i doubt that, sure she may night be as powerful as her sister, but surly she could take him on right?

dident even read it and gona say "this gona be good"

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It's probably better explained in this thread.

1219644i have TWO OC's and they will be interracting with the mane six, so i think im good.

I like this already

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Just for Luna to KICK HIM IN THE BALLS!!!

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It´s not rape if she want´s it...

Anway, this is looking very promising. Gonna keep an eye on it! Keep up the good work friend

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Thank you for loving on my comment~!

AND NOW FOR THE RAINBOW ARMY!

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...OF SHEEP!

GO, MY SHEEP! Attack Art and break his defenses with your sheepiness!

I shall be posting this everywhere now....just for you, Art.

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NO DO NOT SEND IN THE UNSTOPPABLE RAINBOW SHEEP ARMY! HAVE MERCY!

fuck i need sleep all i saw was the sheep

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Too late! MUHAHAHAHAHA!

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They're unstoppable! Even if you eat many of them, they'll just keep coming! Plus their wool is rainbow flavored, so they're spicy too.

1219913 I'm caught in the all mighty rift of writers world and rainbow sheep... It's gonna be one of those nights again, isn't it SSP?

SSP: you bet your bucking ass it is!

1219554 so your a necrophiliac?

1219947 it's best not to ask that.

Seems like it could be good. Just wish more had happened in this first chapter.

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Your SSP can keep one of the sheepies if she wants. They don't really attack, just don't hit them too hard or they'll explode(with rainbow filled doom).

1220022 SSP: i could NEVER hurt one of these adorable things. *grabs one and starts stroking it.* you wanna feel artty?

Art: Keep that thing off the couch. It has flees.

1219888 You're better off using this.

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They do not have fleas! They are rainbow sheep who destroy all parasites and diseases with their rainbow-sheepiness!

1220039
I couldn't find a gif file that had a Pinkie army...

1220073 About your first reply above mine, don't you mean PARASPRITES?

1220086
Awful pun is awful...

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ಠ_ಠ

Keep it going like this and you'll get me likin' it in no time!

Oh! And I have the most odd thing to show you!
You'll love it!

I'll be keeping an eye on this one.

No offence to you or anything but this story seems highly promising but once i reached the end of this chapter all i can say is... I hate cliff-hangers and i want MORE!

1221143 just as planned!

dang man why did u have to end it right when it was getting more interesting but hey i can't control what u do and don't do just keep up the good work and plz at leas try not to troll like that again it makes me go crazy if i can't read more

1221221 Don't worry, the future chapters will be very pleasing. I promise!

1221327 ok i will look forward to them but when are you going to start posting more chapters like daily?

1221544 The chapters are to be posted once a day. That way, it gets shown on the recently added section every day and that goes for the feature box as well. I may miss a day or two, but hey, I've got a lots of other stories I'm writing other than this one. Check my user page out if you want to!

so luna is oblivious that reminds me of twilight sparkle and her always being oblivious but that is not important what is important is that this story is... fabulous and seems like it might be pretty funny

Well this is interesting
I like how you made Luna sound like a spoiled brat lol.

Ohhhhhhh.... GREEEAAAT!

Inb4 featured:

Now commencing Shameless promotion of friends fic.

Luna Shoves A Cell Phone Up Her Plot, the fanfiction.
It's a parody of the Luna does stupid shit genre and it's actually quite well written for something so ridiculous.

Launching distraction maneuver to get noticed and shit.
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That will be all.

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So a gaurd is going to rape a magical Alicorn princess who is bigger,stronger and wiser then him? XD

Its a great start for the story ^^

This is one of these...'innocent'...napping Luna pics. Enjoy!

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Silly Luna, the Death Moon hasn't been created yet.