• Member Since 22nd Aug, 2012
  • offline last seen April 17th

Orthoros


A guy from switzerland who likes cheese, mountains and horse words.... lots and lots of horse words.

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!!!WARNING!!!WARNING!!!WARNING!!!
Proceed at your own risk, it is highly recommended to protect your eyes from laying eyes upon the words in this piece of fiction! If you do anyway, it is recommended to rinse your eyes with bleach and commence with a class two brain reboot.
Proceed at your own risk.
!!!WARNING!!!WARNING!!!WARNING!!!

With the warning out of the way, what is this?
This, is my very first attempt at writing a story from back in 2012. It's... not good, to say the least. At the time of posting, it was torn apart by the few brave souls who read it, but there was also some constructive criticism involved, which helped me tremendously down the line.

I eventually deleted this out of shame, not wanting this story to stain my rep so to speak. But now, I think it's funny how bad it is, and I though I'd bring it back to serve as an example for aspiring writers.

Nobody is good at what they do when they start out, and this is proof. I hope that somebody sees how garbage this is, and maybe gets the courage to write something themselves.

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Chapters (1)
Comments ( 5 )

This story is 10/10 IGN, 100% Rotton Tomatoes, 10/10 IMDb, 100% Metacritic.
Bravo dude👏 this story is a must-read.


Wait, how did you get the chapter even though you deleted the original one?:rainbowhuh:

11045729
Probably still had it saved on Google docs or something ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

11045736
actually, i jumped through some hoops and got it from the fimfic archive :V

11045740
Yeah, that works too :P

So... like a time capsule except it makes you cringe yet gives off nostalgia?

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