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Short-tale


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Maud finds herself unable to sleep do to an odd artifact. She tries a method that Pinkie recommends and thinks back through her day. Of course the day involved Daring Do, a bunch of ninjas and a cow cult. Will Maud ever get to sleep?

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You need to work on your grammar. You keep going back and forth between present tense and past tense, sometimes even within the same sentence.

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