Well after spending several years on Nirn, I'm finally about to go home with magic. At least the was what was meant to happen, but now I'm a gryphon in Equestria instead.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder how Twilight is going to react to seeing a young griffin single-handedly take down a freaking wyrm.
She'll probably looks a little something like this. XD
11081840 Yes but the MC is not the Dragonborn remember? and they didn't spend years learning with the greybeards on how to shout either. I felt that making the MC both the Dragonborn and have all that badassery I wouldn't be able to make the story interesting enough during combat because by the time the MC leaves Nrin it's been probably about two years since the DB defeated Alduin. Anyway the long and short of it is that I just didn't want the MC to be too OP to the point they are boring.
11081485 I know I should probably just ignore this comment but I have to ask; 'Why did you feel the need to make this comment?'
You could've just stopped reading and never read it again or heck even a downvote if you don't like it that much. But unless I get serious static from my readers that they don't want the MC to be an intersexed (futa/herm. having both male and female parts) being, I won't be rewriting my story to please a few disgruntled readers. Especially since it seems most readers either like it or don't care that the MC has both sets.
11082453 It just creeps me out having a female part in a male part together on the same body just creeps me out nothing against you don't let one comment destroy your creativity keep on writing I did like the beginning getting sucked in by the TV when playing your favorite game I just hope that does not happen to me when I'm playing Red Dead Redemption 2 the year 1899 no internet
Not reading this story boy and female parts together very creepy
Hey another chapter nice
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder how Twilight is going to react to seeing a young griffin single-handedly take down a freaking wyrm.
She'll probably looks a little something like this.
XD
Won't Fus Ro Dah be faster at distant attack?
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Yes but the MC is not the Dragonborn remember? and they didn't spend years learning with the greybeards on how to shout either. I felt that making the MC both the Dragonborn and have all that badassery I wouldn't be able to make the story interesting enough during combat because by the time the MC leaves Nrin it's been probably about two years since the DB defeated Alduin. Anyway the long and short of it is that I just didn't want the MC to be too OP to the point they are boring.
11081485
I know I should probably just ignore this comment but I have to ask;
'Why did you feel the need to make this comment?'
You could've just stopped reading and never read it again or heck even a downvote if you don't like it that much. But unless I get serious static from my readers that they don't want the MC to be an intersexed (futa/herm. having both male and female parts) being, I won't be rewriting my story to please a few disgruntled readers. Especially since it seems most readers either like it or don't care that the MC has both sets.
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Who said anything about that?
11082453
It just creeps me out having a female part in a male part together on the same body just creeps me out nothing against you don't let one comment destroy your creativity keep on writing I did like the beginning getting sucked in by the TV when playing your favorite game I just hope that does not happen to me when I'm playing Red Dead Redemption 2 the year 1899 no internet