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I'll have to check this out after I finish the current and next story I'm reading.
This story isn't dead?! Yippy! I was sad because I liked the premise and saw that it wasn't updated in a while. Well, now that I see it ain't, I'm gonna start reading!
[reading intensifies]
~ Neon Lights
6130101 Nope, its still very much alive... the delay has been a combination of writers block, not being satisfied with what I wrote for the chapter when I did start writing again, getting jobs, loosing jobs, and eventually accepting that I can't seem to get the chapter as good as I want so... yeah, I decided to wrap it up, publish it and move on.
6130134 That sounds like how I am when writing. Except I also had to deal with finals... Shutter.
Glad to see this is alive and well. Ironic that I just found it yesterday, though...
~ Neon Lights
6129233 Mine is called, "I'll get to it... Eventually."
Seems like that went moderately well.
I'd imagine this story took place sometime before Red Eye came to power, so retaliation would be less likely from some big group like Fillydelphia. Still, that got rather messy.
Holy crap this updated!
Loved this chapter!
Don't leave us hanging so long next time!
And it begins how all masterpieces start—with kinky sex.
~ Neon Lights
6129268 I commented on the story page not on any of the chapters. But hopefully, when I have time, ill read it and like it.
6132759 Ah yes, Chapter 9! Fran to Foxglove... its the only mid-chapter transition so don't worry. I spent ages deciding how to do it and none of the results seemed very good. At least you worked it out!
IT LIVES! Funniest thing is I was just thinking about this the other day and suddenly BAM! Update. I'm not saying I'm psychic but...
6133041 9 months in the making I'm glad it was still on your mind!
6136314 What read as Australian?
6152305 Lithium is a name you should remember ;-) Francium's mother
Glad you liked the chapter Though I wish everyone would slow down
6154942 Thanks There are a total of 6 Alkali metals, Francium is already in use, and given naming childen after elder family members is quite common, I suppose that leaves 5 to choose from
6354791 You read chapters 5-13 in 23 hours? Damn... that's slightly depressing
6356609 3 years writing (sort of) read in 4 hours...
So how long until the next update?
6369282 Hard to say. I got around 6K done, then had to ditch some of it, but now I have a robot event in 3 weeks so its all hands getting 2 new robots finished and fixing 2 more. So, no idea
Well at long last I've gotten around to catching up with this story, and I'm very glad I did. It's been quite enjoyable thus far. I like your pacing, I like all the little engineering and technical details you throw in without it being overwhelming, and I've liked these characters so far. Francium is a fun lead, with a solid head on her shoulders. Seems to think fast under pressure but without feeling unrealistic. She has her breakdowns and issues that keep her from feeling like a cardboard superhero and instead a real person just trying her best to deal with a lot of high pressure situations. Her relationship with Helix is nice because it feels solid and developed from the get-go, without being forced.
So far I think I like Foxglove the most out of the supporting cast. Kid's going through a lot of tough stuff and is developing nicely into a tougher pony while still clearly having a lot of unresolved stress under the surface.
I'm interested to see where you take this, especially because I get the feeling there's some serious secrets about Fran's Stable that have yet to come up, but may well have some serious ramifications for our protagonists. Looking forward to reading more.
6375750 EEEEE! Thank you!!!!
I've been putting this off for too long, because this story has the 'Stable-Tec's Research & Development department' and I wrote the story 'Stable-Tec R&D' I have to read this. Time to take a dip in the pool and bight into this story.
Finished ch3, and so far I have to say that this is different, different in a good way. I think it's the aspect that our main character has over a hundred ponies to look out for, unlike most story's were at most their is a team, and anything they do involves the team. It's hard to keep track of all of them in the current team, but it still feels like it works for what it is.
Anywho, I'll keep reading, I just hope this story has an end, I hate it when I read a story and it gets abandoned. It' so sad.
And Ch13 is read! It's a fun story, a bit confusing when there is more then one point of view in one chapter without a better transition. Occupation Hazarded did it better by using images for the transitions. A lot of characters to keep track of, making it hard to relate to some of them. The setting is fun, though feels a bit small. As for the story, it feel's like it's already too late to save the capture stable ponies, it's been what, over a week or two?
Still, if you update I will read it. Good luck and have fun.
Your book has been advertised on the new facebook group page: https://www.facebook.com/groups/foebooks/ :)
6556372 Thanks for the heads up! Wish I had managed to get the new version of Chapter 1 out before this though.
6559028 Thats okay, join us on facebook and you can advertise yourself. I'll be watching your story anyway, and when updates are announced, I'll be advertising them, but if you join us, you can do it yourself. the group is made for self advertising (and advertising others and anything foe related). ^^
6642298 Is that good or bad?
6655432 Thank you And yeah, I get that suggestion a lot. Its been changed about 4 times, never seems to get any better.
Well I have one thing to say to you, Fran and Helix better have that kid at the end on this. Or I will do to you what Fran did to that reidar.
But seriously mate this is a great story, and you a great writer.
I love it when I find these little gems, in what is normally a see of shit and mediocre story's.
Keep up the great work, and I am looking foreword to what the future has in store for Fran and her little gang of wasteland heroes.
Edit: sorry about not replying to the other relays you did to me, They are not showing up on my dashboard.
Update when? (Pls b0ss)
7082428 I got about half way into chapter 14, then Battlebots and Robot Wars happened. I'm not sure when I will get it done given how mad life is right now.
7369875 You can do what you like, I don't mind, but there are plenty of unique Stables left - http://falloutequestria.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_Stables
Stables 14, 38, 45, 50, 54, 64, 65, 68, 71, 76, 80, 83, 84, 86 and 100 are all free. Take your pick.