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An Artificer and a Wizard from Eberron end up stuck in Equestria due a small oversight. Forcing princess Twilight has to deal with them and their strange ways

This is a story inspired by my D&D group where when two of us couldn't make a session our characters got put in an alternate dimension for the year that that session spanned. Permission has been givin by the players of the involed characters to write this story.

Abilities of the characters have been exaggerated for a better story.

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Punctuation needs a lot of work and a few spelling as well.

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Thank you for your help. I have made the corrections you indicated and a few extras based off of your suggestions.

Hmm, given a few clues, I believe our Artificer friend might be a changeling, fun race they are. The Wizard is evidently a Tabaxi, playing one myself atm, Artificer Blood Hunter, fun stuff.
I wonder what subclasses they are? Something in the back of my head is saying Order of Scribes for the Wizard, but that only became "official" recently. That's mostly due to them inscribing the runes into the book, which with that order lets you recall all your spells from your book into this one and the old book is wiped clean.
As for the Artificer... hmmm... I have nothing to go off of for them as we haven't really seen any of their abilities that would give away their subclass. Also, shenanigans with the bag of holding, or as I prefer to call it, the bag of extradimensional bullshit.
Nice to find another DnD story on here, looking forward to seeing how this develops!

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Most of what you said is correct. Our DM was gracious enough to allow us to change to the new subclasses when TCOE came out. I did hint at what the Artificer was during the Bag of extradimensional bullshit scene.

I have always been curious about multiclassing I'm kind of a single class bitch I see the benefit of multi classing but I just like playing a pure class too much

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Armorer? That is the only other thing I can imagine, or maybe artillerist given the kabooms in the beginning?

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He started out as a Battle Smith

Forgive the nitpick, but this should have the Dungeons & Dragons tag, and probably the Crossover tag too.

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That is a good Idea that I didn't think about I'll add them

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