When a villain with control over the flow of time appears, Twilight is sent into a bleak future where everything has absolute order. With her fur was stained blue and her mane shortened by the effects of time travel, nopony, not even her future self, recognizes her identity.
Nopony, that is, except Discord.
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Has potential.
Seems like an interesting and original premise. Thought I have to say that Twilight accepted Discord's company too fast. I'll be tracking it to see where it goes.
Neat, I'll track this. Good Discord dialogue by the way. The premise does excite me. Who better to wreak a little havoc than the master of magic herself?
Keep it up. 
One tiny correction in the 4th to last paragraph: DIscord yelled
You double capitalized.
I am entirely curious to see where this goes.
Looking forward to the next update.
if you need help with ideas, you ask me, i can help...
(sometimes it is good to have someone else with an outsiders view)