2202564 And? I give credit to people who help me or who made the art I payed for. Plus to say who own what and so on. I been writing fan fiction since 04 and it how it was done back then.
It going to moan at one or 2 words not being Grarma correct big wop dude. Since Thardoc token over and beta my story he done a perfect job. He very busy before hand taking on my story to beta, and if he gramra once or twice and miss it with him being very busy it not a problem.
Since you can read it ,dosnt take 1 second to understand what the word means.
I WAS BORN WITH LEARNING DYSBLITS, SO MY SPELLING AND GRAMRA IS NOT THE BEST OK. AN BEFORE YOU MAKE A SMART MARK ABOUT SPELL CHECK,IT POT LUCK FOR PEOPLE WITH LEARNING DYSBLITYS.
Down vote i don't give 2 f, their over 100 people who had no problems with this story.
Good. He should be shunned for that. Wild animals like wolves and cheetahs can't be tamed. Their instincts are too strong. He's putting people in danger by being an idiot. And yes, I do realize that he's a fictional character.
2216275 I beg to differ Cheetah wolfdogs and even full wolf pets are difficult, but I've met people with pet wolves before, granted I am on border of montana and canada.
"Dost thou like it?" Luna asked him,wondering what he thought of her drink.
should be "Dost thou like it?" Luna asked him, wondering what he thought of her drink. (missing a space)
"Oh it is so on, im so going to kick your flank." Luna said to him in a confident tone.
Should be "Oh it is so on, I'm so going to kick your flank." Luna said to him in a confident tone.
"Your welcome, shall we carry on our game? I do look forward to seeing how a princess acts when drunk" Sin said in a playful tone to her.
Should be "Your welcome, shall we carry on our game? I do look forward to seeing how a princess acts when drunk," Sin said in a playful tone to her. missing a comma
"Haaaaa I can't believe you super glue, your Sister head to her pillow." Sin said bursting out in a fit of drunken laughter.
should be "Haaaaa I can't believe you super glued your Sister's head to her pillow." Sin said bursting out in a fit of drunken laughter.
you seem to be adding comma's when not needed. There are more but I don't going full grammar nazi unless I know it will be appreciated.
Sin like my little brother always says 'Death if you get drunk and sleep with a woman and her parents or siblings catch you sleep with her. Run like the devil is coming after you and scream like bitch'.
well crap, also FIRST
2202564 And? I give credit to people who help me or who made the art I payed for. Plus to say who own what and so on. I been writing fan fiction since 04 and it how it was done back then.
It going to moan at one or 2 words not being Grarma correct big wop dude. Since Thardoc token over and beta my story he done a perfect job. He very busy before hand taking on my story to beta, and if he gramra once or twice and miss it with him being very busy it not a problem.
Since you can read it ,dosnt take 1 second to understand what the word means.
I WAS BORN WITH LEARNING DYSBLITS, SO MY SPELLING AND GRAMRA IS NOT THE BEST OK. AN BEFORE YOU MAKE A SMART MARK ABOUT SPELL CHECK,IT POT LUCK FOR PEOPLE WITH LEARNING DYSBLITYS.
Down vote i don't give 2 f, their over 100 people who had no problems with this story.
2198138 I have no clue what you 2 are going on about lol.
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2197502 Luna can do anything she wants she is a Princess
Nooooooooooooooooo! I wanted to be first cursssssssseeeeeee yoooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuu
Keep it up man. Loving the updated chapters!
2214502 ?
Good. He should be shunned for that. Wild animals like wolves and cheetahs can't be tamed. Their instincts are too strong. He's putting people in danger by being an idiot. And yes, I do realize that he's a fictional character.
2216275
I beg to differ
Cheetah
wolfdogs and even full wolf pets are difficult, but I've met people with pet wolves before, granted I am on border of montana and canada.
Annnnnnnd shit has hit the fan.....fun
That was halarius.
Grammar nazi mode
should be "Dost thou like it?" Luna asked him, wondering what he thought of her drink. (missing a space)
Should be "Oh it is so on, I'm so going to kick your flank." Luna said to him in a confident tone.
Should be "Your welcome, shall we carry on our game? I do look forward to seeing how a princess acts when drunk," Sin said in a playful tone to her. missing a comma
should be "Haaaaa I can't believe you super glued your Sister's head to her pillow." Sin said bursting out in a fit of drunken laughter.
you seem to be adding comma's when not needed. There are more but I don't going full grammar nazi unless I know it will be appreciated.
anyway love the story. have a mustache .
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!
Quick sin jump out the window!
Sin like my little brother always says 'Death if you get drunk and sleep with a woman and her parents or siblings catch you sleep with her. Run like the devil is coming after you and scream like bitch'.
True story. Also great job on the story.