I'm assuming that the cub and pup are either genetic experiments, aliens, or natural mutants, or else that the magic of Equestria that seems to saturate absolutely everything is making them smarter than most other young their age and species. Whichever the reason, so far it's at least decent.
Though at what point did the guard disobey orders the first time? It was the pup that attacked him first, not the other way around. True, he objected to not pursuing his interrogation further, but performed no hostile action.
I'm not sure that everybody is aware of this, but Dogs and Wolves are more different than one might think. Even as pups they're much more independent than dog pups the same age, and even though they tolerate Humans if they're raised around them it's not very often that they're happy-puppy-dog about them. If they're cross-breeds with dogs it's far more likely, but you said it was a wolf.
Of course, this IS a fictional story, so it's not like it really matters in the long run.
awesome cover pic
2158048 Thanks it was made by http://www.furaffinity.net/user/penmark/
truly is a pretty awesome cover art
oh, and there's no need to put my name on every chapter, haha. just at the end of the description, and/or in an author's note is plenty.
Love the cover art and the grammar is pretty much perfect now. Well done Thardoc can't wait for more chapters!
i can picture the adorable puppy!
I'm assuming that the cub and pup are either genetic experiments, aliens, or natural mutants, or else that the magic of Equestria that seems to saturate absolutely everything is making them smarter than most other young their age and species. Whichever the reason, so far it's at least decent.
Though at what point did the guard disobey orders the first time? It was the pup that attacked him first, not the other way around. True, he objected to not pursuing his interrogation further, but performed no hostile action.
I'm not sure that everybody is aware of this, but Dogs and Wolves are more different than one might think. Even as pups they're much more independent than dog pups the same age, and even though they tolerate Humans if they're raised around them it's not very often that they're happy-puppy-dog about them. If they're cross-breeds with dogs it's far more likely, but you said it was a wolf.
Of course, this IS a fictional story, so it's not like it really matters in the long run.
awwwwwww
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thanks :D
2158084 I see the word 'Ok' come up every now and again, I must ask, why not 'Okey, okay' or 'Right.'