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Set after the events of Fallout Equestria, Homage is ready to travel on another journey with her companions. But something lingers in her mind, and the thought of Littlepip brings her unrest. It is then a mysterious stranger crosses her path to give her one last chance to remedy her doubts.

A quick one-shot to the epic that is Fallout Equestria. I will be using the Stranger for a future FoE fic, so let me know how this goes! I hope you all enjoy, and please leave feedback so I can bring you better writing as I progress.

Special thanks to Julip, Aero, and DamnfoolBrony for betareading.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 8 )

Cool story, bro.

You got me, alright? I'm a sucker for love stories... And Fallout: Equestria, of course.

Jio's comment up there helped so much, but I'll try to repeat what he said in a lengthier, more in-depth way.

I remember seeing a comment - I think it was by SuperBigMac - on my side story that said something about wanting a Doctor Whooves/Fallout crossover, so I think this will go over nicely. Your pre-readers are doing an excellent job. The story was polished. It felt like it was missing something, I'm not sure what, but I liked it. The idea is very sweet. We'll have to see what Kkat has in store for us on Christmas, and if it matches up with what you've got here.

tl;dr ---> Cool story.

#3 · Dec 21st, 2011 · · ·

Hah! I figured 'Mysterious Stranger' was going to be a stallion packing an obscenely powerful .44 Magnum...Not the Doctor. :P Awesome story. Love it.

#4 · Dec 22nd, 2011 · · ·

at first I was like :rainbowkiss: and then I was like :trollestia: cool story bro

You know with it being Lil' Pip was I was half expecting a raunchy sex scene. This is good to though lmao!

Hmmm, I guess you should have waited for the Afterword, huh? Still a good story, and I've been wanting to see a Dr. Whoove in FO:E side story and you did a pretty good job. Now if only somebody would write a good "Human in FO:E" side story, I'd be happy.

94778 Well, you could say that Homage, Pip and her other friends found out that Pip can unplug herself from the SPP, and wander around the facility, explaining the Afterword.

God now you make me want to write a displaced story about The Mysterious Stranger from Fallout. Curse you for at this rate I will never get to the other stories I have in the works

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