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Really enjoyed this. As a fan of Caroo's art, I can appreciate where the ideas came from. Found it nice and well written and easy to read.
Getting similar vibes to the Iron legion, and tickle cults etc from other caroos works, but you have well and truly made the story your own. I'm actually eager to see more, and look forward to more stories set in this little verse you have made. You were able to establish a decent chunk of lore and world building without lore dumping or exposition. I'm especially interested to find out who Night Shade actually is, her history with chrysalis, and what actually happened to shining. Really hoping Moondancer will get some revenge eventually if/when Nightshade gets caught. I'm a sucker for a happy ending.
You have clearly put a solid amount of effort into this, and it was very much worth the read. Futa/Mares and sound beads a bit of a turn off for me to be honest, but didn't feel like it detracted from the story. I wouldn't mind seeing the threat of diapering the tickle torture victim however that you alluded to but never followed through.
All in all, a very pleasing and well done addition to tickle-fics here on the site, with a visible and successful amount of effort and work put into it, and I look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks very much.
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Thanks so much for reading and for the feedback! I'm glad you liked the story <3
I did take a lot of inspiration from the Breaking of Celestia & Luna fics by AcadianForest and I'm glad it was still distinct.
The character of Nightshade is based off an OC of KRD aka kinkyrainbowdash and I do have some more ideas going further in depth with her, Chrysalis, and their victims, but that might be a while and probably not as long XD It also would be fun to follow through on those other threats~
Thanks again!
i admit, i'm not into Futa at all, or feet tickles. but how you wrote it, and the tickling extending to such terribly ticklish torture. Well, let's just say it was good stuff.
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Thanks for giving the story a shot even if it features kinks you're not into. I'm glad you enjoyed it! <3
Thanks again!
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I mean, i love tickling and tickle torture of a sexual nature, just not a focus on feet. You did a good job. I dont even like futa and you did good
So, i read this out of curiosity, since tickling isn't one of my things. But it is just so well done, the grammar, a nice story plot. I would like to see a secuel some day. That many downvotes are just salty people.
Cheers
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Glad you liked it and thanks for reading! I'm glad people can enjoy it even if they aren't into the story's main kink XD